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| gen x 2008-07-12 ch 4, anon. | abuseNot bad |
| Screaming Dean 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseI'm happy to see that you're keeping this up. |
| Cat 2 2008-02-15 ch 4, | abuseexcellent! I am a huge wolverine Fan, so looking forward to wear your going with this. |
| The Nation's Voice 2008-02-15 ch 4, | abuseIt has been a long time since I've written on here. Hoping with some more time off coming to me I can try to update some more. I have slacked on this story because of everything I've been doing lately. People can feel free to view some of my work at myspace dot com slash hardcase and at saintsinnerent dot com. And feel free to critique. Thanks to everyone who has left positive reviews to date. |
| Cat 2 2007-10-31 ch 3, | abuseBRILLIANT Story! Please Update SOON! |
| Excel 2007-05-05 ch 3, anon. | abuseGood work. |
| Screaming Dean 2006-08-14 ch 3, | abuseThis is a pretty good story. I can see you put some thought into it. Keep it up. |
| Ever_L8 2006-03-01 ch 3, anon. | abuseWow very nice very nice 2 more Kudos. I hope to see more of this story. |
| Ever_L8 2006-03-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseStill good now on the 2nd chapter. I can only hope to see fighting, In the next one. Its just in my tast. To have brutal fighting. Your doing well with out it. |
| Ever_L8 2006-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was a very good story. I am only on the 1st part. I well be reading on. I must say kudos really 2 of them. |
| abejarano12 2005-12-23 ch 3, | abuseAwesome. I can't wait for the next one. Keep it up. |
| Ray Battlemonger 2005-12-12 ch 3, | abuseYour story is getting better! I never thought what it would be like if some U.S. soldiers disliked or were suspicious of Captain America. |
| Ray Battlemonger 2005-11-16 ch 2, | abuseMan, you're story is getting really good! I think you're writing is pretty good! |
| The Nation's Voice 2005-11-12 ch 2, | abuseI hope what i'm about to say is allowed but I figured I could give an insight into my Captain America. I feel Cap is well idolized but no one knows where he came from. He was a kid with a severely broken home and became the greatest symbol of hope. But that doesn't come from being injected with a formula or for that matter three months of training. I feel there is much more of a story to him than what people tell. And that's why I'm telling this story. Not of Captain America the superhero but Cpatain America the human who was frail mentally and just wanted acceptance. He does become the greatest hero out there but why? Not by fighting the Red Skull or Baron Zemo but because of the people who carried him along the way. This is my story. Drama, action, sincerity and real life issues he would've dealt with then. I hope those who read enjoy and feel free to leave reviews or what you think about how I affect Cap that made him the man he is today. Thanks to those who have read thus far. Sincerely, AJ Figueroa aka The Nation's Voice |
| Ray Battlemonger 2005-11-10 ch 1, | abuseKeep writing! I'm glad to see a good action story in the Captain America section (there rarely is one). Can't wait for the next chapter! |