Hey! I'm still here, sorry I wasn't able to review earlier, I've still got stuff to do after and around the new year. I'm interested in where this is going to go now that you've continued to update.

Hope to see more soon and Happy New Year!

T-person

i just saw the origin date of this fic, 2005...you must have really liked this story to do it for so long. I really don't know how you managed to keep this up unless you're like a teenager or something that has nothing better to do, no offence.

honestly the only reason I have kept reading so long is because I had nothing better to do, but seriously with each passing chapter I disliked the story more and more. The major problem is that there's no real plot to it, just alot of lame sub plots that aren't really related, it's pretty much like a tv drama. If that's your intention then you have done great...if not then I can only say you have a lot of work to do. Your characterization was not only ooc, but it made no sense it didn't follow logic and I'm curious as to what you were thinking in having this whole marietta edgecomb thing have such a huge role. I only read this for the of beign a Harry/Cho shipper, but this really just wasn't worth it. Did you write all this on the go, organic write, or do you have some sort of scheme that you are following because this has no sense of direction at all. Um, well I'm not going to say I like this story or that its good but I do commend your effort.

ALRIGHT FINALY YOU UPDATED it is about time. Man i was almost ready to loose hope but THANK GOD YOU UPDATED. And you did a good job to. anyway ty for finaly updating it is rare i find a story like this.

Hey, this is really good. I'm impressed at your writing ability. Maybe i'll read more in the future but like I promised I read the first chapter.

Wow... too many typos or wrongspelling in this chapter like...

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Wow... Harry's OC in this story... mostly this chapter

I guess this explains my question then...

Good start but... how the hell are they going to hold a funeral for Sirius when he fell on the veil??

UPDATE DAMNIT UPDATE its not fair that i must see such a good fanfic go so long without an update PLEAS UPDATE

this is like the coolst fic iv read its SO FREAKEN AWSOME how ever you havnt updated pls up date or ill go insain (oh tolate) pleas update like now

story was not too great. I do not think that harry would just sit down and take being slapped by the weasel. I just don't understand how harry can go hate dumbledore and be fine with being slapped. I just does not make any sense. I hate pansy harry's. Sorry if the review seems to harsh.

Wow that was great you actually got me to feel i haven't read any other story from fan writers that did as well as you.i think you almost did as well as J.K

Very INteresting.. :P

lloll..
Harry's a n ass.. :P