Reviews for Cherry Street and Beyond

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Beppo Magic Bicycle 2008-07-09 ch 9,	abuseGongoozle= to stare vacuously
Beppo Magic Bicycle 2008-07-09 ch 8,	abuseDid I catch an Amalie reference?
Beppo Magic Bicycle 2008-07-09 ch 7,	abuseI must say that your Wonka seems to be a tad of an extrovert. Thinking about the books and movies, I always tend to find him a bit mysterious and... hmm.. a little shy, believe it or not. But it would make sense that he's so naively and unprejudicedly enthusiastic since he's not yet been betrayed.
Beppo Magic Bicycle 2008-07-08 ch 5,	abuseAh such a young Wonka! I see what you're up to! Same age as a young girl, ho ho!
Beppo Magic Bicycle 2008-07-08 ch 4,	abuseI must say I adore the improvised Nutcracker preformance. I just now realized how relvant it is, what with the land of candy. I always seem to forget the whole second act because I was always asleep by then when I was little. I like the ominous Slugworth, as well. Not too obviously nasty, yet. I would like to see how a normal day at the shop goes, not just the opening and closing.
Beppo Magic Bicycle 2008-07-08 ch 2,	abuseOnce again, I must commend you. Truely well written. And it preserves the spirit of the book. The only thing that irks me is describing Wonka's eyes as purple, although I suppose it's true for the new movie. I maintain that they are blue, it's just that Depp's eyes are so dark that they had to have dark blue contacts. But I'm a purist, so I'm biased.
Beppo Magic Bicycle 2008-07-08 ch 1,	abuseFantastic! A pleasure to read, and a cedit to Roald Dahl, even if it is inspired by the Burton's movie.
Everto Tonsor 2008-07-06 ch 25, anon.	abuseI 'm so happy that you've finally updated a sort-of long chapter. And the part with Willy behind the door is very clever. Also the conversation. The cow's name is Yolanda? That's odd. Great!! This chapter wasn't 1500 either. Your author notes don't count. That's the problem, no matter what word says. At least this chapter was productive though. Sorry I couldn't review earlier. That would be my p-par- Them. Their fault.
Cataiee 2008-07-02 ch 3, anon.	abuseEkk! Can't review, have to keep reading this smaarvelous story!
Cataiee 2008-07-02 ch 2, anon.	abuseI'm gonna keep writing reviews. So there. But I love the descriptions of the workers! Amazing adjectives. Well Done!!
Cataiee 2008-07-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is the awesomest story Ever!! It's totally what I imagine Wonka would have been like when he was younger! Keep writing!! Please!
Everto Tonsor 2008-06-29 ch 25,	abuseYES YES YES! I've been waiting so long for this!! I thought this chapter was kinda short but it's been so long that I enjoyed EVERY minute of it!! And his nonsensical talking was wonderful. One thing to criticize. DON'T PUT LITTLE NOTES IN YOUR STORY!! Yes it was a very good rhyme!! I can't wait for the next chapter. We need a flashback! Or Willy to get sick and deny it!! Skrblr, PM me soon! I gotta a question! And since I don't know the answer, I'm gona ask you because If I didn't i'd never find out the answer and that would be horrible. Update within 30 days or else!!
Everto Tonsor 2008-05-09 ch 24,	abuseYay! Yay! Yay! I love it! Now Willy just needs some flashbacks or repressed memeories to pop up on him during Halloween-or for him to not celebrate it, which will raise questions with his employees. I like the paragraph about him not taking a break. The first two sentences made me crack up!
MaRaMa-TSG 2008-04-29 ch 23,	abuseYOU'RE BACK! Wow, how long has it been? Anyway, it's been a while now that I've lost my will to read, I have a bunch of fics pilled up in my email folder where I got the updates of the fics I liked. So when I saw this one updated I skipped all the rest and came to check. Now I'm struggling to read it. I must start from the beginning but I'm so...unmotivated? Well, things have changed at my side and so have I. But I'm so glad you still kept adding to this one. The best Wonka fic out there! So, I'm gonna try reading it again, even if it takes me weeks!
Nienna Telrunya 2008-04-27 ch 23,	abuseDie, man-who-has-the-worth-of-a-slug, die. Well, maybe not die. But repent, relent, be content with confessing your crimes and spending your time in a scantily-decorated cell. Fire is a serious business. One must wonder about sanitation concerns in his shop. His hair still isn't curly. ;P Ah, enjoyably hyper (I reread the whole thing). I am glad you have decided to continue your story, and shall look forward to future installments with joyous eagerosity.

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