Even though I don't read Zelda fics that often, this has to be one of the better fics out of any topic I read. You got me hooked with the first chapter. Good luck with this fanfic and your book.

YOU UPDATED! :D I had feared I would never read a new chapter again! I do hope you continue it, I really do enjoy this fic

Okay... I haven't been on my FanFiction account for more than three months, but I signed back in just to say this:
(*deep breath*)

I AM "SO" GLAD YOU HAVE BLOOD OF THE HOLDERS ON FANFICTION!

I originally read your story on and I fell in love with the story. I checked in regularly to see if there were any updates for about a year, but, alas, nothing showed up. I was literally just on the site a minute ago when I thought, "There has got to be an update somewhere..." After Google-ing a sentence, I found this updated version and [let me tell ya] my fan girl squealing side just kicked in...

Thank you *so* much for continuing this story!
XD

~LB

Please update this story! You wrote this really well, and I hope that you will finish it.

I love your story, Coasty. It seems very sad though that I won't be able to see the ending to such a great fanfic. (seeing that your so busy with your other book and all.)

This has been one of the most excellent fanfictions I've ever read! I started reading it on , and was looking for updates for forever, but I didn't know you had it here on ! Awesome work! If you want my critique, it would be wise to go through and edit punctuations and inconstencies and all that other fun jazz. But wow, 200 pages?? Awesome work! Keep it up!

Ahh this is one of my fav fics because it is so interesting. I love your use of diction and language, it is so professional in a way and I love the personality you have given the characters! Superb!

Your story is great. It's rare for me to say that, as I've only ever found three fanfics that I've actually ever enjoyed. I love how you use descriptive words to describe everything, and the story is well-written. The only thing you could work on is I've noticed that you used a few run-on sentences, but other than that your work is amazing. Can't wait to read more of it!

Finally, I have been watching this fic on Legend of Zelda Series for almost a year and a half. I finally stumbled across it here. Excellent fic. Love the complexity of your writing style. I've got tons of ideas for Zelda fics, but it's probably going to be a few years before I do anything with them. Thanks for the inspiration and I'll Let you know if I ever start posting my own. Reviews from an experienced author like yourself would be very helpful. P.S. If your looking for good fics Read "Odyssey Blade" by Silence-Darkness or "The Immortal's Heart" by silverwolf05.

Regards,
The Annoying One

great story!

this is still uber awesome. Can't wait to read the rest!

Lovely writing, good plot line... all in all an excellent tale.
Update soon!

I noticed that you stopped at chapter 33 and that you haven't updated in nearly 3 months. Have you abandonned this story because I hope you haven't. This story is great..,.which comes pretty rarely.

YAY! Update! I'm so happy that you updated! I love your story a lot, I never get tired of it no matter how many times I read it!

Yay, you're back!
Nothing too exciting happened in this chapter, but it was well written and gives us readers a hint of what is to come.

I appreciate how imperfect Zelda is, and how Paldnor is finally showing his true talents.

Pen