 trainwreck 2009-11-02 . chapter 4 i love saitou tokio fics. great last words for this chapter |
 Snake of Medusa 2009-09-13 . chapter 4That last line just cemented this story as one of my absolute favorite RuRoKen fanfic. Any chance of an update sometime soon?
Invader's blood marches through my veins like giant radioactive rubber pants! The pants command me, do not ignore my veins! |
 NiminariAmriath 2009-07-05 . chapter 4lol! u had better update this! u have me interested and i didnt even think i liked this pairing! |
 gokigenyou 2008-06-07 . chapter 4I love this story!! I like the characterization of all your characters and I'm very impressed on your attention to detail! The story line is very exciting and promising and I really hope you will update soon! XD |
 Laughing Bandit D Royale 2008-04-17 . chapter 1QUESTION: Why is this fic a saitou & kaoru fic?
or is it because my com/the link is a bit whacky?
Anyway, LOV it!
update soon. |
 Relik 2007-12-17 . chapter 4...Wow. This is great. I believe somebody mentioned that it reminded them of Sabriel? I agree. And because I loved that book, that love easily transfers here. Really, fantastic.
I can't wait for Saitou and Tokio to meet face-to-face and all that. Bring on the next chapter! |
 Samantha 2007-12-03 . chapter 1 Hi, uhmm..., I had wanted to start reading this story, but I think there's something wrong with the link or whatever to the first chapter. Instead of getting the first chapter to Liquid Flame, I got Dripping Water Haiku. |
 Lady Calliope 2007-01-07 . chapter 4Like Saitou I think I'm in love, too. This story is so creative and detailed, the world you've created so believeable, I can't help but fall for it. There are so few Tokio and Saitou fics out there, and even fewer well-written ones, so coming across this story was an unexpected surprise! I'll be adding this to my "story alert" alongside TSC.
And please just reassure me, this story isn't abandoned, right? *lip quiver* |
 Dragowolf 2006-12-21 . chapter 4 I LOVE THIS STORY! I can't wait till the next chapter, how it is written how it is protraied beautiful! I like the dictionary at the top and who is Tomoe Gozen? Other than that I loved how you ended this last chapter with Saitou falling in love it really stuck with his charater!! I can't wait till the next chapter so please write soon so that I can learn more about skylark. I have heared Tokio decribed as a kitten or as Chesii (little person) but never as a skylark. I LIKE IT! Write soon!! |
 CelestialDeath 2006-12-13 . chapter 4Hi. I've read a lot of your stories, and their all very well written. What you write is so addictive, I can't get enough, and this story is no different. I am wondering, and praying, that you will continue with this story. It's such an intense and wonderful story, it would be wrong not to finish it. Anyway, please update.
Thank you,
CelestialDeath |
 makka-na-yuki 2006-11-14 . chapter 4SaitouxTokio isn't exactly one of my fave pairings, but after reading only a few chapters of your fic, it might change my mind ;) Very nice plot, with all the magic and stuff. And they're so young XD
I love the way you ended this chapter. The last sentence was simply perfect. |
 Laughing Bandit D Royale 2006-10-18 . chapter 4HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
He’d shot the Black Lizard, stabbed it, and even burned it with a flamethrower earlier on when they’d cornered it at the edge of the forest. And still it kept on going. But this girl, who looked all of fourteen in her braids and baggy t-shirt, had killed it in one stroke – using a marshmallow roasting stick.
I love the thing about the marshmallow roasting stick!
I also love the Hajime Saitou was in love.
and what exactly is springest? |
 nobody 2006-09-23 . chapter 4 I've really enjoyed your story but I've been waiting for an update since sometime last year (on MediaMiner.) Hope you update soon.
Love the story. |
 SunMoonNeko 2006-08-01 . chapter 4ow wow!This story is Great and soo so...! wow im lost for words about how great it is. I just love how you made Hajime Saitou poetic, i also love how you made Tokio kill the monster and have Hajime see it and fall in love with her because she killed what he could not with a simple marshmallow stick to the eye! its beautifully done, you didnt make the caracters way OOC but changed them to fit the fic. without complely losing them(even thoue we dont know alot about tokio in RK u based her off of the real one BIO wise and this makes ur story different and special by putting a historical spin on it). The glossory at the end is fine but i also fined that after u use a word/frase in another language its best to put the english right after it in (). Ur spelling read fine but dont trust me on that because i have misserable spelling skills. PLEASE UPDATE SOON and email me to chat and talk thanks bye! |
 Jay 2006-07-19 . chapter 4 I am completely in love with your story. Saito has always been one of my favorite characters in Rurouni Kenshin and I am so happy that he can be a main character in a story. I love his attitude and I love Tokio too. She is extreamly cool. Great job. You should really think about becoming an author (unless you already are one!). You have one fan right here!
Thank you so much for the time and effort you took to write this, it is very appreciated!
Jay |