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The Lightning Flash
2005-10-31
ch 1,
abuseHmm, interesting.

I'm not quite sure that Rick would really be into someone THAT much younger than him (RP excepted, although Sparx isn't that young.), or that Sam is the type to 'get herself in trouble'. But overall, I rather liked it. :)
Scarabbug
2005-10-30
ch 1,
abuseYou’ve been very good at freaking/scaring me with your fic lately, Sarah. And I love this. Heather seems to have... well fitted in to a post apocalypse.

I kind of liked the almost-comedic touches you put in. Like the pterodactyl-dragon-thing breaking the window. those two forms worked really well and the humour was so slight as to not be gigglesome – just a tension break, which I liked. You’ve used the challenge requirements very aptly. Nothing much else to say but nice job. :D

Remind you to give you more challenges in the future.

I’m going to go eat something to stop my stomach churning now.
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