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| sushigal007 2007-12-24 ch 11, | abuseJust read this all and wanted to let you know I loved it. :) |
| weimfriend 2007-10-01 ch 11, | abuseGreat story, wondeful |
| Kristafied 2007-06-14 ch 11, | abuseI've been cruising your site all afternoon and thoroughly enjoying your fics! This one is particularly good -- and it explains the Reds hat from the baseball fic I'd read earlier! Thanks for so many terrific stories. |
| MJ6 2007-05-30 ch 11, anon. | abuseBest. CSI. Story. Ever. |
| kelticsgirl 2006-10-08 ch 11, | abuseI hope you do write more this was great.. do you have any x files somewhere? or Have I just not looked hard enough? Thank you for a nice time of reading. A good break,which I really needed. |
| ilovecsi 2006-08-07 ch 11, anon. | abusebest story ever ^__^ |
| AlexCurtis 2006-07-15 ch 11, | abusegreat story |
| sherryw 2006-01-05 ch 11, | abuseWhat a great story. If this was your first fanfic you were awesome. Just loved it. You did such a great job with all of the characters and their reactions. You did a great job with Nicky angst. I hope you plan on writing another story. You are a great writer and should. Take care!! |
| rozzy07 2006-01-04 ch 11, | abuseSorry it's taken me ages to review but I have to say this whole story from the the outset has been superb. Stylishly written, truly thrilling and filled with enough angst and battering to keep a girl really happy! Thank you for having the skill to present it all in such an enjoyable way, never once wavering in plot dynamics or characterisations. Great stuff. More stories are demanded of course, and I am really looking forward to your next posting...Please!! |
| M2S 2006-01-03 ch 11, | abuseI just found this story. Excellent read - I read the whole thing in one sitting, and it flowed well. You really captured Gris and writing in the perp's POV was an excellent idea. Great job. You're going on my author alert list! |
| sokerfreek922 2005-12-28 ch 11, | abusei just found this story and i read it through without stopping, it was wonderfully written and exceptionally exciting to read, it was a great story and i look forward reading more of the writing if u decide to write more, i think u should do a story about the softball game that they talked about at the end of the story, just an idea. awesome story! |
| everybetty 2005-12-13 ch 11, | abuseJust got back and you posted the last chapter!! Absolutely frickin Loved the ending - the parallels Grissom makes to the Cinci Reds - the way Nick turned it around to make Gil feel better - the affection and friendship was palpable - but the best were the unspoken words of Grissom's followed by the exhaustion of his yearly alloted people skills with his heavily layered, "hurry back". loved this story ... goes to the top of the favorites list - can't wait to see what else you cook up - esp. as u may find yourself with some time on your hands in a bit :) drop me a line when u get a chance so's we can catch up! |
| kara lynn 2005-12-05 ch 11, anon. | abuseWow. What a perfect ending. I wish we could see something like that on the show. And holy crap, you wrote all of this for someone? You must be a pretty good friend. Well hope to see more from you (ok I'm begging for it). Luv n stuff, Kara |
| AusGal 2005-12-05 ch 11, anon. | abuseWow. Loved it all! Every bit of it! I'm a sucker for some nickywhumpage, so that was good, but I also loved the interaction between the team, and of course, I adored the last chapter, where por nicky realises his true worth! My favourite line was of course the one about hula dancing. I couldn't stop laughing! If this was written on a whim then have more whims! |
| FaithHopeandLove951 2005-12-05 ch 11, | abuseThis story was just amazing. Every word was well written and full of action. I am glad you had a chance to try out writing and hope to read more from you in the future. If not, thank you for this story. It was really a great piece of work and I thank you for your hard work in putting it together. |