Pretty good for a Tenchi fic, but not to my tastes. As a shoujo-ai author, I primarily tend to dislike Kiyone and Mihoshi being split up. Same for Ayeka and Ryoko. I can deal with them BOTH mrrying Tenchi, but they also have to love each other. But, I'm a shoujo-ai fanatic. As can be tested by my large ammount of time attributed to reading the you MI fics.

Okay, so I'm slow to the party, but just read it and enjoyed it :) too little GOOD tenchi out there, especially with Kiyone in it

Well my friend, I've now seen the Tenchi Universe anime and decided to give this fic another go.

I liked it the first time, but now that I have a better understanding of the characters and the history, I love it. You really did a great job here.

"If I were the type that looked good in hats (and sadly I am not), I'd tip it to you."

That was heart-aching. Gotta love these Tenchi/Kiyone fics!

That's how it ends? Come on! There has to be another chapter right? This is great. I just hate to see Kiyone so miserable when she deserves a lot more respect. And if this is how it ends I'm kind of dissopointed. Not in you or anything but I was hoping something would go right for Kiyone for once. But this is awsome. Keep up the great writing.

Oooh I love it, ya really poured on the emotion between Tenchi and Kiyone. and Ayeka I think she would do what she said. anyway gotta fly, hope to read more of your stuff

It's wonderful. And Kiyone is my favorite character too! I really did enjoy that.

this is a pretty good story. Lots of angst, and little, if any, OOC'ness. Well done with Kiyone (who's my favorite character, by the by) and Mihoshi. There were a few miniscule format and grammar errors, but nothing to really worry about (occasionally forgeting a word or a letter). The pace of the story was excellent, and I enjoyed it thoroughly.You and I seem to be in the same boat. Both good writers, but other writers get more praise. **Begin Shameless Plug** Iffin ye get a chance, let me know what ye think of my stories (Illusions of Life, K1 Goddess Syndrome, and Requiem in an afternoon sitting). **End Shameless Plug** Well, your story does add to the woeld that is Tenchi and expands the setting a bit, so I think you succeded in telling a fine story. 8.9/10

That was very good. In the show we don't see Kiyone's feelings put themselves out for Tenchi like Ayeka and Ryoko do, but it is obvious that they are there, even if they are subtle. I usually go for T/R, but there are two other good matches for Tenchi and they are Tenchi/Tsunami and Tenchi/Kiyone. Tenchi/Kiyone is my second favorite. Kiyone is probably the most sensible, level-headed and normal compared to the other girls. In general terms, she would probably be the best match for Tenchi, personality wise if she would show her feelings for him in a less subtle way. Again, a very good story and I would like to see more stories done by you in this section. Ja ne! PS: I love The Eagles!

It was really good.

Hey, Blackbird! Great story, as always! Even though I've never seen Tenchi, I liked it (and sorta understood what was going on). Don't really know what else to say other than to say it was good. But I said that already, didn't I? *sweatdrop* Ano... Keep up the great work! _ -your good friend, MK