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HermioneXHaibara
2008-07-10
ch 1,
abuseAww,That was so cute=D
I really like this kind of stories..^^..
Honestly,You did a great job!
Keep up the good work :)
*faves*
AiEdogawaIsaBellaCullen
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abusei had to read this one a couple times before i got it...
I liked this
Inner turmoil!
Go Ai!
Thanxs!
Miyano Ran
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abuseIt's really deep. I like it very much! You used simple words to show such sentimental and deep meaning! It is very beautiful...
KristiexxNguyen
2005-12-10
ch 1,
abuseI have a feeling that if I watch more episodes with Ai, I would understand it better...but since i have yet to do that (I haven't even seen 129, when she APPEARS)... From what I understand though, it's nice. I wrote a fic with no quotations once...Sometimes, a story w/o details are the most meaningful ones ^^
Fhujeth
2005-12-01
ch 1,
abuseo0...WHAT? lol I liked it :) You write good stuff I love everything you write :o So Keep writing...
Hillary
2005-10-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseOk that made no sense but I did see there was some hidden meanings init. I bet if i re read it i would understand more. Keep writing your good at it.
Dagron
2005-10-31
ch 1,
abuseAhah!
Experimental writing :cD...
Let me see.
For starters I'm no expert on such things ^.^;
First-Silvera's theory helps me make more sense of it.
I had to read it three times over to realize that every two lines it was Conan talking, alternating with Haibara's thoughts and-or reactions, and the quotes...
...[Looks for hidden Clue!]...
Ahah! Quotes seem to be taken in the chronological order of the series.
Is this some metaphor of her evolution throughout the series then?
[Goes to read the notes on your profile...]
Hey, the way you think in chinese differs from english, it's only natural. The french have some expressions that wouldn't make sense to the english and vice-versa, I know that from practice. It should only be normal that it's the same with chinese (I guess?)

... So My Metaphor theory holds, huzzah!

...Okay, so that was mind challenging. I think I'll fav it and reread it at random times... Just to tease my brain. Aha! ;c) Thank you Sn~!

[Random thought: ... I wrote a not too bad Conan-Ai One-Shot in french recently... Maybe I should translate it to english some time?]
FS
2005-10-31
ch 1,
abuseYes, it was weird. So Ai has forgotten everything, and Conan tries to make her remember by showing her her diary. At least I hope that you meant that. I only wonder why it was so terribly short. You could have made it a bit longer, since the idea is really not bad. And I wonder why Haibara should open her diary with "Once upon a time". Hm. Maybe I didn't get it. XD
redgrrl
2005-10-30
ch 1,
abusewow. I've never read a story with such a deep meaning! You always seem to steal the best DC storylines.
I like how you protrayed Ai in this story. Great work!
jack-adam
2005-10-30
ch 1,
abuseHmm. Untitled. You would think it was the corny name of a Backstreet Boys title. It's silent and sweet; a hidden meaning between every sentence. I like that :)
joeshen
2005-10-30
ch 1,
abuseA hidden meaning behind everything...

unless of course I read it wrong... but then again, this _is_ Ai's point of view...

very deep... very very deep.
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