Can you pleas continu it even if you are not going to post It on the site can you emall it to me

Oh. Every interesting. I like how the first two chapters are written. Short but good. Please update soon.

can't wait for the next chapter!

Dont listen to WTH!
They're just jealous of your talent ^_^

good story so far! i like your idea =)

You're doing a great job! Another chapter soon? Oh, and flamers should be eradicated from the Earth by being turned into vampire food. (For some annoying reason my first review didn't show up.)

Please More:) That was Mind blowing CHapter two;)

YaH! Update! Update!

I'm addicted. More chapters! oh, and in the last line of the chapter 2, you put "Marcus...etc." instead of "Viktor...etc."

Dont bother listening to the idiot who sent a flame.. youre doing a great job, mate! :D

more and longer chapters please i like the way its going :D

Awesome! Write more, cant wait for a naughty scene starring Viktor! :D

Uh...yeah, wait a minute...doesn't Viktor die!? And also, last time I checked, nothing in movies/whatever has EVER regenerated their brain/skull/half of their head. Yeah...so...sorry, this fanfic blows. Also, that's just plain disgusting! Selene and Viktor...dear god...-gag-

FINALLY someone answered my challage, and a wonderful start. Even though this might be a challege for u, this is a great beginning. I can't wait to read the other chapters, plz contiune.

OMG! I love this!I am so tired of reading Selene/Micheal and Marcus/Erika fics! Please update soon, or I'll be forced to do something...um... violent?