hi,this story was good! the ending was a little abrupt but i still like it all the same. i hope you write more about shrimp, and cyd.

I don't really understand the story or its intention. The dialog feels a little dry, almost flat. I think if you improved that, everything would be a lot better. Also, your first sentence is a little difficult to get through. I found myself wondering why it was structured like that. I hope this helps and keep writing!

This was an interesting ending but it was kind of lacking in action.

... Discontinued?

:(

very good, i love this series, it is funny and innocent enough, gingerbread is at least!

u suck

I like the way you captured Cyd and Shrimp. This is one of my favorite books.

AWw! Nice story! I love it! are u going to write more? if u r , i can't wait untill hte next chapter!

i loved the book Shrimp! too bad you are the only one who wrote a story about it. I really liked yours. please write another story

this is really good (:

ive read the whole series and i wish this is how it happened!

good! You should add some more to this too!

wow i reli like this its reli good keep up the good work!

I didn't like the book SHRIMP but your sequel totally made up for it. I think that the way you made Shrimp go back to her that way was AWESOME only I hope you write a bit where he explains WHY he came back. I wanna read more more more. hope you write more. )

Good job! I loved Gingerbread, Shrimp, and Cupcake. congrats on being the first to write a fanfic about Cyd!

Keep writing!

I didn't know that someone enjoyed Cyd's story as much as I do. Wow, that was a surprise! I really liked your plot. I don't know what it is about it that I like about it yet though. I wish you would write more. It's really good so far, keep up the good work.

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