|Reviews for Convolutions|
| terri8502 7/10/10 . chapter 18
Just finished reading your story Convolutions and it was great! Very original storyline - I love the Jack/Sam AU, and this is the first story I have read that addressed the issues they would have faced being in love (and married to each other) in the military. I don't know if there's a sequel to this, will be going thru your other stories and may find one there, but even without one, this was a great work. Looking forward to reading more stories, thank you for sharing.
| sapphiretwin369 4/17/08 . chapter 18
Wow! You have no idea how much I loved that story! At several points I swear my heart was breaking and I was gonna cry. That was a great story!
| sjaddict 6/17/06 . chapter 1
Fantastic story! Hope there will be a follow-up to tie all the loose ends together. You are a fantastic writer.
| mary 4/15/06 . chapter 18
Wow what a story i loved it.
| Yol 4/14/06 . chapter 18
Enjoyed this story so very much and now there's that void in waiting for the next chapter. I do feel as others do, that the issues Carter had at the begingning of the story were not resolved as to why she really wanted to be separated from Jack. It seems that there should have been an epiloge of the story perchance after her recovery. So thanks for all your hard work in giving us die hard RDA and stargate fans more story line of Jack and Sam.
| Batari 4/11/06 . chapter 18
Hi! Finished reading this fic last week, but didn't have time to leave a review until now.
Really enjoyed the plot. Great job with the character portrayal. Sam's character felt a little off kilter at times, but I just watched Chain Reaction last night and was able to picture Sam's characterization better.
I would have liked to have seen the fic address the backlash of Jack's op some more, but maybe you have that set aside for another fic.
Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.
Thanks for sharing.
| Sci Fi Fan Gillian 4/8/06 . chapter 18
| Trinitystargazer3 4/7/06 . chapter 18
That was a great ending. :)
| gategirl13 4/7/06 . chapter 18
aw. absolutly great story loved every chapter and was surprized at well they were all written.(i know i should have figured that out after every chapter kept getting better...but i'm slow so..;) please keep up the fantastic work. i was smiling like an idiot when they found a cure lol.
all i can say to sum it all up is thankyou for the great action packed, long, quick updated chapters. :) :) hope to read more of your stories
| Anunnaki 4/7/06 . chapter 18
Love the intensity and the emotion. Beautiful ideas. Great characterization, as always. :)
Constructive crit? I 'ended' rather abruptly - did you run out of muse? :) I'm not quite sure whether Sam remembers him (as her husband) or not; or even whether she remembers their conversation from before she collapsed (when he 'told' her that they were married), and I was hoping to catch a glimpse of the two of them discussing/working out the issues that seperated them in the first place. The realizations they each had (seperately) didn't ever come together, and they were the entire catalyst for the story in the beginning - those issues were really outstanding, believable issues, and I was quite intrigued by their impact (especially on Sam). I would LOVE to read more of that - if you ever decide to revise and/or write a sequel. I think there's still a lot left unexplored. The story is unfinished! :)
| Natters 4/7/06 . chapter 18
| blueorchid26 4/7/06 . chapter 18
Just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading this story. Are you thinking of writing a sequel tying up the loose ends - Jack and Sam back together again, any repercussions from Jack's little side trip etc. Once again a great story.
| Natters 4/7/06 . chapter 17
aww poor sam
| sekkii 4/7/06 . chapter 18
AH ! I just Loved this story ...full of twists and angst and suspense ...
Write another ... soon
| Diane 4/7/06 . chapter 18
Jennings/Jenson? Who cares? As long as Sam came back from the near dead. I guess that's what was needed of Jack, to take the bull by the horns and convince Sam to wake up. Love the arguement between the best friends that was interrupted by the coma victim. Kind of predictable ending, but enjoyed the story. After all, there are only so many ways to scare your husband.
Unrelated to story content, just format:
Nope, it wrapped around again. Hope you can figure it out for future fics.