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pnkrockgrl
2007-05-18
ch 21,
abuseok i like this part so much u dont even know its cute and i love every thing about it love love
pnkrockgrl
2007-05-18
ch 20,
abuseomg i dont know what to say i wanted jay and emma from day 1 but i guess i dont git that but u know what i loved ur story so much u made if work so well u r really really good at this
pnkrockgrl
2007-05-18
ch 19,
abusewow sean left i cant belive it iam sad seans better then that maybe if he sees the baby he will come around..so some 1 go git hes ** drag him back and make him see the baby k ok
pnkrockgrl
2007-05-18
ch 18,
abusewow how meny baby r there now lots lol
pnkrockgrl
2007-05-18
ch 17,
abuseaww that was cute i loved it
pnkrockgrl
2007-05-18
ch 16,
abusecute i like the flash backs
pnkrockgrl
2007-05-18
ch 15,
abuseno dont make jay like that girl plez
pnkrockgrl
2007-05-18
ch 14,
abusewow um no this is crazyness
pnkrockgrl
2007-05-18
ch 13,
abusei dont think manny its going to do n e thing to hurt emma or the baby and thank good jays all right
pnkrockgrl
2007-05-18
ch 12,
abuseomg i have tears in my eyes poor jay poor emma i think she loves him
pnkrockgrl
2007-05-18
ch 11,
abusenope its not rape cuz he was a lil buzzed i think
pnkrockgrl
2007-05-18
ch 10,
abusehe didnt rape her is that even rape thats not rape is it some 1 needs to tell me it cant be can it?
pnkrockgrl
2007-05-18
ch 9,
abuseno y jay y now she going to hate him and hes going to fell bad and drink himself way wait where where the babys when all this sex was happening like emmas and Brooklyns babys jsut wanted to know
pnkrockgrl
2007-05-18
ch 8,
abuseyay so she has not seen jay in 3 weeks whats up with that i want jay more jay lol n e ways have i told u i am in love with this story well if not u know now
pnkrockgrl
2007-05-18
ch 7,
abusewow umm no i dont want emma and craig but it dose make it a twist in the story but i want my jay back with emma ew thay had sex in her bed well old bed but ew ew n e ways now i have seans butt in my head wait y is that a bad thing idk
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