I was upset when Wolfbiter died. I quite liked his character. :)

I think you did a good job of getting into his head. You mentioned the events well too, it didn't feel rushed and summarized them nicely.

I quite like your writings. I haven't finished reading all of his Blade-universe books yet, but it's definitely nice to read fan fiction on some of the characters. I'll be quite saddened when I finish all of those books as Duncan seems to be finished writing about Blades.

Keep up the good work!

- Yeats

aw! i really liked him.

I am reading again Durendal's book, and I really liked this. It is a pity that such a good character as Wolfbiter is doomed to live so few pages in the story. I must say the same for Quarrel. If you write like this when you're bored, please do it more often.

Bye,

Iliana

I love that you changed the point of view to Wolfbiter. It was interesting to hear it from someone else's perspective instead of just Durendal's. It's great!

One word, fantastic. Really well done.

Very shiny. It's definitely a unique view of Durendal's risk-taking, though not unfounded.

Kind of sad to see it through the eyes of Wolfbiter, though, and his perspectives are all just right for his character.

Kudos!