Ah, I did enjoy reading this fic.

Very MUCH.

I hope you made it a little longer, however.

And even though there's really no mush toward the end.

It was perfect.

I remembered when she said during Season 2 that next time Roger should take her home.

And it was perfect.

RogerxDorothy is really addicting @_@

Superb job on this fic.

I do hope that you make more RogerxDorothy fics eventhough it has been 8 years since you wrote this one xD

I agree that Big O is alive too. He makes his own decisions and chooses his own Dominus.

He ,sometimes, even communicates with Roger.

I love Big O :)

I knew he wanted Big O.

Oh sheesh.

Like Big O would ever accept him as a Dominus anyway.

What a waste of cute face (Michael).

It's extremely good!

_

You're too harsh on yourself.

OMG. What do they want from our smexy Negotiator?

Evil Michael. Tsk tsk.

But I guess he is right.

Roger is in love with Dorothy. He just doesn't realize it yet xD

Norman, the matchmaker xD

Hahahah.

But really, I CANNOT STAND ANGEL.

Argh. I wish I can just erase her from the world of Big O.

It will be a lot better without her.

But I love how Dorothy was a little jealous too. xD

O.M.G

*Lets out a loud and long fangirl scream*

This is literally like my dream story for Roger and Dorothy.

Roger jealous. A young, handsome man interested in Dorothy /

It couldn't get any better!

LOL.

I really think Roger needed a little push to admit his feelings for our cute, little android.

I love how his first thought was to ban every grocery trip xD

Lol.

I love it.

*Rushes to read the next chapter*

Oh, and btw, this is so going to my favorite list.

Such a nice little story. I like happy endings. Too bad you did not serve coconut cookies. I like coconut cookies.

This was well written and very sweet! I like that they were so in character.

-Ahria

How happy I am to find such an excellent Big O fanfiction on my first try... *reader-happiness level rising* And it's in-character, and has a plot, and awesome ending, and I like the way you describe Roger and Dorothy, and, yay!

This story has a strong conflict, characters in-character, and a believable resolution. I hadn't seen it before, being on page 9, but it is well worth the time looking for it. Thanks!

...wow...thats really all i have to say. you are a great writer. this story was one of the best on the site. great job!

Aww... that was sweet and cute...wonderful. Good job. You should write a sequel.

wow.

yes, that's all I have to say. I really loved this fic, it was great! You've captured their characters flawlessly, and I love the end. Very realistic!

Keep writing: stormqueen873

That was awesome. Perfect. Write more like it.

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