Nicely done. I can't wait to see the sequel.

~V.

I loved it. I almost cried when he died. Truely amazying.

hi
i'm so glad i found this fic

having recently re-read "The Milk of Paradise" (on ISF) I was about to email you and find out if you had ever written a sequel... but a simple google search and i very happily found this - yay

thank you for sharing your fics - i've definitely enjoyed reading them :)

Lea

ah such a good story

that was amazing. everyone completely in character, very well written. one of the best fics i'v ever read.

Wonderful! I loved it!

Awesome story.

Amazing story - well-written, in character and actually making me sympathise with Snape, which is hard enough to do. Just one thing, however. The oath Snape swore at the beginning, and the oath at the end - don't they contradict one another?

Other than that, I can't find anything that confuses me. Nicely done. ^^

simply amazing.

I simply loved it. It captured a dynamic that is very, very hard to achieve i.e, keeping the tension and distrust between them, while also creating affection. Also, love how in character both of them were. Snape was so very... Snapelike. Excellent.

Thanks.

Thanks, because there are so few stories of Snape and Black. There are even fewer that don't make me step away in disgust.

Yours, which is even more rare, achieves something really hard - your Black and Snape are both in character, and in spite of that, their relationship is believable.

And, unfortunately, it follows the canon all the way, even through the Veil. Sigh.
However I still stupidly hope, that Rowling will somehow bring Black back. Uncurable fangirlishness, I'm afraid.

Thanks once again for a really good read.
/Sorry for my English; as you probably guessed it's not my first language./

pfft...my idea! except, far more well written than i could ever make anything. and well, not exactly, but with the whole severus going "i've got nothing else to lose" yeah...anyways very nice story.

good start!
fatlazikat out!

Excellent tale.

I didn't think you'd take the story as far as this but it's a fitting end.