I think it was a wounderfull piece and you shg more sentinel stuff as this one was really good

So sweet! Very creative, I loved it! :)

Excellent story!! The world is a lot smaller than we realize. This was really good! :)

WOW! This story is great! I like it. Perhaps you'll have more ideas like this one for a story...? The topic is cool. I can't find enough words to say how well I like this story.

GI Jim! Everyone needs one! Now, for only $9.99.. oh, who am I kidding, Jim's worth a lot more than that. :)

I enjoyed the story, hehe.. Thought it pretty neat ^__^ Kudos for coming up with it :D

Great story. Hope you continue.