This is a very beautiful story. Very well written. Good Job!!

Brought me to tears, beautifully written!

I THINK THAT THE STORY WAS WELL WRITTEN. IT HAS GREAT DETAIL AND MADE SENSE. IT THINK IT COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER IF IT WERE WREITTEN IN PARAGRAPH FORM. LIKE MAYBE PUTTING THE SUB-SUBJECTS INTO A DIFFERENT PARAGRAPHS. I THINK SOME PEOPLE COULD HAVE UNDERSTOOD IT MORE IF YOU WOULD HAVE GAVE MORE DETAIL TO HOW AND WHY TONY AND JAY HAD DIED AND WHY ALL THE THE Z-BOYS DECIDED TO GO THIER SEPERATE WAYS. ALTOUGH YOU DID GIVE ENOUGH DETAIL ON EVERYTHING ELSE LIKE THE FEELING AND THE EXPRESSIONS ON STACY'S FACE. HOWEVER IT WAS GREAT HOW YOU PUT THE PART WHERE HE LAID UPON THE BEACH AND SUDDENLY HEARD A FAMILIAR VOICE. IT WAS LIKE A MEMORY AND I FELT AS IF I WERE REALLY THERE IN A WAT, LIKE I WAS STACY AND THIS WAS HAPPENING TO ME. IN A WAY IT IS LIKE A DREAM THAT STACY WAS REUNITED WITH THE REST OF THE Z-BOYS AND HE ENDED UP ACTUALLY DOING SO BUT IN THE AFTER LIFE.

Oi oi! This story is amazing- truly. It almost brought a tear to my eye. It's beautifully written, I could almost feel Stacy's emotions.
:] Kudos.

aw, *wiping away tears* that was sad

Really good. very very good. i love stacy. he's my fave. when he got young again. omg no words lol great work

cool...this was really neat!

i like this story so far update soon please

this is a very intresting story about the Z-boyz at an old age. I like the use of comparasion of the old days of the Z-boyz and in the current time of the story.

this is pretty good! it has details. i could picture totally picture Stacy and his emotions. i like how you have him realize he's passed. =]

so kewl! great fic, luv da details. are you gonna write another chapter?

Aw... that was great! I luff Sid. I cried when he died. I'm working on a fic now... should be just one chappy... but ya never know...

Dat was a great story... keep it up...

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omfg this story was good it touched me lol no seriously i liked it alot but why did u have to kill tony HE WAS SEXY lol

um wow. That's any interesting death i guess. Well at least some1 has made a fic. for this movie. col

that was good. if thats what death is really like, i cant wait. it'll be better than real life.