a bit confusing, at least to me, but good none the less! :D

One thing I gotta say...** AMAZING!
I LOVED THIS! Great ending, such incredible details, so in-character.
Well done!

*blink* Well...THAT was interesting. I mean I was all like WOOT with the smexy parts but then Reno shot Kadaj and right now I'm like O_o. First of all, OMFG HE KILLED KADAJ!! >:O Second, this wasn't too bad but it was confusing at some parts. Third, you should also get into their personalities more, and I think you could work on your writing some. Don't get mad at me, it's just constructive critism! I didn't HATE this, but it could have a lot better, especially since KadajxReno is an awesome couple.

What the hell? Did Reno shoot my adorable sexy Kadaj. Oh hell no. That's so not cool. I love Kadaj and Reno but why the hell did he say "Goodnight" and pull the trigger. Is it some kind of sadistic story or something. I like those but if Kadaj is dead then how are they gonna make love. Unless Reno ** a dead guy. LOL.

Great so far. Are you gonna continue?

m got to love dark fics of reno. great job.

Fantastic, I loved the ending. Reno fics are my favourite, you've written this so well. It's perfect

Wow... Very much amazing. I like dark fics about Reno, and this one is one of my fav's. I love the ending, but have one question. Did he really 'kill' Elena?
Great story :)

That was absolutely beautiful.

There is so much imagery in your choice of words. Your version of Reno feels right, even without him being his cliche hyper self. I also loved how you captured Kadaj's madness.

Exquisite.

Ohh Reno/Kadaj, thats sexy :D I loved it. Too bad he killed Kadaj, I would have liked to see another chapter.

hm... i think it's a bit violont..you killed kadaj!

Very well done. I don't usually read AUs but I loved this. (Found it on Livejournal but I didn't have an account at the time.)

Thanks for writing.

Cool... I love it ^-^

I already reviewed this on LJ, but I feel I ought to review it again, since I have just that much love for it.

*favourite'd*

much love to your brillaint brain m'dear...i adore your work...is this a one shot? does reno kill kadaj?