 James' Lily Flower 2007-06-24 . chapter 8Cool! What a cow! He he he! Poor Ani and Pad! |
 Alley Parker 2005-12-26 . chapter 8I liked that ending! Very creepy :) |
 mrs skywalker 2005-12-21 . chapter 8 im looking forward to the next addition, but doesnt it seem a little far away? |
 Lilac Moon 2005-12-20 . chapter 8Great story Mizra! I look forward to the sequel! |
 DarthGladiator45 2005-12-20 . chapter 8good story. Good direction, unfortunately Siv was mistaken about Anakin not taking care of her, he did of course. |
 Goth Jedi 2005-12-20 . chapter 8man, I loved this fic! can't wait to read episode 2! |
 BellaRu 2005-12-20 . chapter 8Wow, very interesting. Can't wait for the next installment! |
 mrs skywalker 2005-12-13 . chapter 7 i hate padme so much, she is so stupid, she ruined everything. |
 Goth Jedi 2005-12-12 . chapter 7aw, Anakin proposed... If Siv still loves her master she's not gonna like this, and Count Dooku's alive! man, what's gonna happen now ?? |
 DarthGladiator45 2005-12-12 . chapter 7Outside, in the hall, a venerable captain smiled. He did well.
Yes and so did the author writing this story. If I may make one gentle critique though, please space out the paragraphs it will make for easier reading. Thanks! |
 DarthGladiator45 2005-12-05 . chapter 6Poor Siv; maybe she needs an exorcist? |
 Goth Jedi 2005-12-05 . chapter 6WOW! 0_0 Siv's in the detention center AND chopped Obi-Wan's arm off! What's gonna happen to her now ?? |
 JennAnn 2005-12-05 . chapter 6Very good, long chapter. I liked it alot. The one thing I especially like is Anakin's worry of Siv. He's not completely hateful toward her and not completely blaming her. He still wants to find hope in the situation and try to help her.
Interesting complication with Obi getting a robo arm..(lol forums?) but anyways. GREAT chapter. |
 Alley Parker 2005-12-04 . chapter 4No Ani can't leave the Order! Or retire or whatever! I don't want padme to die 'cause that would be evil but I don't want Ani to leave! |
 Alley Parker 2005-12-04 . chapter 3Why oh Why the hell di she do that! i mean she says she loves him but she's hurting him! |