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James' Lily Flower
2007-06-24 . chapter 8
Cool! What a cow! He he he! Poor Ani and Pad!
Alley Parker
2005-12-26 . chapter 8
I liked that ending! Very creepy :)
mrs skywalker
2005-12-21 . chapter 8
im looking forward to the next addition, but doesnt it seem a little far away?
Lilac Moon
2005-12-20 . chapter 8
Great story Mizra! I look forward to the sequel!
DarthGladiator45
2005-12-20 . chapter 8
good story. Good direction, unfortunately Siv was mistaken about Anakin not taking care of her, he did of course.
Goth Jedi
2005-12-20 . chapter 8
man, I loved this fic! can't wait to read episode 2!
BellaRu
2005-12-20 . chapter 8
Wow, very interesting. Can't wait for the next installment!
mrs skywalker
2005-12-13 . chapter 7
i hate padme so much, she is so stupid, she ruined everything.
Goth Jedi
2005-12-12 . chapter 7
aw, Anakin proposed... If Siv still loves her master she's not gonna like this, and Count Dooku's alive! man, what's gonna happen now ??
DarthGladiator45
2005-12-12 . chapter 7
Outside, in the hall, a venerable captain smiled. He did well.

Yes and so did the author writing this story. If I may make one gentle critique though, please space out the paragraphs it will make for easier reading. Thanks!
DarthGladiator45
2005-12-05 . chapter 6
Poor Siv; maybe she needs an exorcist?
Goth Jedi
2005-12-05 . chapter 6
WOW! 0_0 Siv's in the detention center AND chopped Obi-Wan's arm off! What's gonna happen to her now ??
JennAnn
2005-12-05 . chapter 6
Very good, long chapter. I liked it alot. The one thing I especially like is Anakin's worry of Siv. He's not completely hateful toward her and not completely blaming her. He still wants to find hope in the situation and try to help her.

Interesting complication with Obi getting a robo arm..(lol forums?) but anyways. GREAT chapter.
Alley Parker
2005-12-04 . chapter 4
No Ani can't leave the Order! Or retire or whatever! I don't want padme to die 'cause that would be evil but I don't want Ani to leave!
Alley Parker
2005-12-04 . chapter 3
Why oh Why the hell di she do that! i mean she says she loves him but she's hurting him!
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