gotta love gohan

this is an awsome story!

i've read it 3 or 4 times, i love it!

great story :]

I'm not gonna lie. This was so funny, I thought I would die. Very cool. Nice flow. I love humorous stories. I'll have to check out some more of your stuff sometime. It's just not often I get around to reading and reviewing other people's work. I really should if it's this good. But I'm always working on my own, you know.

Yeah! Great story! I loved it! _

This was a really cute story. I really liked it. I loved the whole beach setting. In a way it was really romantic. You've done an amazing job on this story. Great job. Laters.

hi can you update this story please?

Yet once again, great G/B and T/P story! I loved it and the little mind reading parts were a good touch in this. I knew right from the very start when you mentioned Goten having a journal that Bra would somehow read some of it sometime. OH, I'm good! But you kept him in perfect character when you didn't really make him mad, just a bit embarrassed. Exacty what I picture him doing. Exelente!

I can't see Vegeta just saying that . . . there is a lecture comine later, eh?

Kawaii! Yes, Gohan would be a protective father. (I haven't seen any GT) I was thinking, when Trunks was going to tell, something along the lines of "Well, Mr. Sayian who could easily pulverize me, I'm in love with your daughter." For the general effect, you know. Which it was.

Yes . . . that always works . . . have one read the other's journal. Of course, it might not reveal what they want it too . . . *grins evilly about her story*

love your story

this is a really good story please continue

we loved it especially the "your balls... twice" we loved the trunks and pan alot and goten and bra good job

How sweet! It's a bit short overall, but it works for the plot. I especially like that Vegeta didn't try to decapitate Goten when he found out...he doesn't ALWAYS have to fly off the handle after all _