ANOTHER great chapter...seriously, you know how to leave us on edge, you should become a writer for CSI...you'd be good at it.

And yes...I would like smores...but not after that body fell over right in front of me. *shakes head* poor Nicky.

Wow...you're off to a great start. This was very dramatic, intense, suspensful, and it made my skin crawl...*shivers*

well done... I'm really eager to see what happens next.

I must say that this was an awesome story. The story was well thought out and well written. I was amazed at how you portrayed the emotions that Gil and Warrick were feeling when Nick was being beaten.

Great Job! Keep the Nick stories coming! You have a BIG fan of your fanfiction here! :)

Yes the dust has already settled on this story and I am just getting around to finding it, but I have got to say...OMG what a fabulous job! Very intense. Very emotional. Great job! I'm off to start reading "And the Tunder Rolls".

O M G - WOW - This is one of my fav stories so far and I am addicted to CSI Fanfic. This was so well written the producers and writters for the show should take it on board. AWESOME

Ugh holidays messing up my head! I just realized I never reviewed your last chapter. Thanks for a wild, wild thrill ride. I wish I could give you an idea for your next story... the plot bunnies seem to be evading me at the moment. Anyway, great work and happy new year!

Happy ChristmaHannuKwaanzikah! ;) And a happy new year to you too, m'dear.

Wow, whatta friggin wild ride. *shakes head*

I definitely think there needs to be a sequel to this. That Tenner dude is fucking crazy, and I bet once he hears that Nick's survived this hellish ordeal, that bastard's gonna be back. It'd be interesting to see him take over the CSI building, with the help of some of his Disciples, and hold the entire night shift crew hostage, while having his little torture sessions.

BTW - just a little constructive criticism... you really think that Nick would've been so stable so soon after all he'd just gone through in the basement of the church? I mean, two days? Naw, I think he'd be out for at least a week considering the extent of his injuries... bet he'd had to have pins surgically put in his arm considering the stress that big dude put the bones through with the twisting and the shaking around. (Sorry, used to be an EMT... just my 2 worth, for what it's worth!) It really is amazing how fragile and yet resilient the human body can be, when all's said and done.

Wonderful story, and I eagerly looks forward to what other stories you have in store for us!

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Krys

Great story...I would love to see a needs to pay for what he did. Maybe have him in danger or have him killed and they have to investigate his death. Can't wait for the next story.

Have a safe and Happy Holiday!

Great Chapter...I'm glad the guys are going to be alright. I liked the way you had the guys playing poker and Sara and Catherine sharing a moment. It was nice. I can't wait to see what they say to Eckly for putting their guys in danger.

what a nice Christmas gift - a complete story! Thank you! Had such a wild and entertaining ride, can't wait for the next. Happy holidays!

I love this story. You've done a wonderful job. I look forward to seeing more of your CSI stories online.

I wish you and yours a happy holiday and a wonderful new year!

Thanks you so much for this absolutely wonderful story! As for the length, the longer the better. I got so wrapped up in the story that I'm glad it didn't end for a while. I love a story that keeps me on edge. As for your next storyline, I have been anxious to read something involving a natural disaster, such as a tornado or earthquake, or even a bomb going off inside their building, all of course involving Nick and some owwies!

ah! It's over at last! Wow, sigh, I loved this story, well great work and I can't wait to read more of your stories!

On Chapter 25, I'm glad Nick is alive. I think Warrick and Nick need the GPS to keep them out of trouble for a while.

On Chapter 26, I'm also glad Warrick is there for Nick. I don't think Nick will be happy to stay in the lab for a while.

I got this story ideas for you to write, Before Nick come to Vegas, he was a cop in Dallas for three years then move to Dallas Lab then moves to Vegas. Warrick first met Nick, (I'm no slash). Grissom hired Nick? What's Grissom and Warrick feeling about Nick. Or you can write whatever you want.

Hey! Glad to read the ending but sad because it's ended...does that make any sense or is just more mindless rambling? Oh well. I really loved reading this story. Good job!

About your next...a sequel could be fun...I would wait for it. Um...not a big fan of the slashiness...so I don't know about that idea. i'm sure whatever you settle on will be gr-eat! (Like Tony the tiger...but duh, I'm sure you got that.)

Hope you have a great period of time between now and then! Shoot me an email or something in there! later,

Chrissie