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| une see 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abuseWell...slightly creepy, but I loved it nevertheless (or because of ?). Beautiful. Utterly beautiful. |
| RainDragon 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuse*stares, agape* HOLY *stops self from using indecent language* *bows before amazingly excellent fic* Wows. I think I will have to check out that author you mentioned. It just so happens that I love All Hallows Eve, as it is oft' called in my house and my head. It's a day when I feel it's alright to mourn without being depressed. (Oh, what a good day... ^_^) Well, anyway, I quoted this story on my profile. (There was one line that just called to me.) Excellent job-- I might even be inspired to write something for the Suna siblings. I haven't to date, but I do enjoy their characters. Keep writing, as always; sayonara. |
| Nezuko 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abuseI like the idea of exploring the spiritual practices of the Narutoverse. And the idea of Kankuro in that empty theatre. As a stage manager mysellf, I can vouch for the ghostliness of an empty theatre. You set the mode wel here. It was interesting reading. I especially liked your line about Kazekage - that he was not a great man. Ah, I'm babbling. Nicely written. |
| Fantastical Queen Ebony Bla... 2005-11-02 ch 1, | abuseVery nice... rather pretty in an eerie way. The writing style was interesting, and fit the story. |
| Impersonating-an-entity 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuseOh, interesting... I must admit I rather expected Gaara's torch to be for Yashamaru, and for Gaara to end up dumping it or extinguishing, or doing something else disrespectful to his uncle's memory... *I* might have to write that now, and tell people to check you out for the inspiration... I like this style, if you stick with it, aI won't argue. ^-^ Entity, the Keeper and Imanen-sama |
| Azamiko 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuseAwesome fic, the style is just great. An interesting way of viewing shinobi honoring the dead... |
| ElasticBobaTurtle 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuseThis was a lovely piece, very poignant and solemn. Beautiful work; you captured the Sand essence well. |
| WolfBane2 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuse(applauds. Gives author a taco) Elegant, almost Poe-like in its grave style. Very, very nice. You deserve far more reviews than you will get. |
| Aseret Kitsune 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abusethis is really good! i love the feelings in it. great job! |