I'm a huge fan of your work. As always. But i'm here for another reason. I'm making a story where FR is heavily involved but instead it's with Hellsing. I already created two chapters.

If you want to check it out go ahead.

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The real reason I'm here is that I remembered this particular statement you made a long time ago. You said, "Made a lot of research."

I'm doing the same thing, but most importantly I have ask, How do you know such and such about how Gods fight? Of epic magic the like? I need some serious research materials on that area.

I am enjoying the story (3 stories?) and was a little disappointed with chapter 8 because it had so little Ranma (the previous tried to balance) but then in chapter 9 mostly Ranma so I guess it is still balancing.

I do like that Death (Kelevor) was able to stop Usagi from raising the dead again. She does have to learn to accept death. Otherwise she would forever be resurrecting those that died, even those that died of old age. Good work especially for that scene on this threat.

Gond was of course right in casting out Duncan but he set up the circumstances and should have for his own sake been willing to apologize and offered peace and cooperation between his followers and Skuld's. Sort of like Mystra and
Azuna. I think his power may wane from now on. Two new deities will replace him. Oh well, pride goes before the fall they say. Good work on this thread.

Ranma, this is every bit as zany as the original. I was laughing until I coughing and hoarse. Excellent.

Brilliant mesh of sheer fun and emotion.

Wow. That is EXACTLY how it would happen with Ranma, isn't it? I'm greatly enjoying this story and hope that you choose to continue it soon.

I look forward to the next chapter, keep up the good work...

This story is fairly good.

I think though that you can ease up a bit on minor errors. D&D is actually not the greatest at keeping their own lore straight because they had so many different writers and gamers coming up with their own stuff. It's part of the reason why 4th ed. resulted in a complete reset.

So, I think it's really OK if you just mention on your profile that there are thousands of pages of material and that if you get some things wrong, to just tell the readers once, in your profile, that errors they report will eventually be corrected.

Very cool story over all, but I wanted to point out one timeline issue. If Elminster has already been to hell, as you established, then the Phaerimm under the Anaurach have already been freed, defeated, and the wall repaired. Elminster wound up in hell as a direct result of a confrontation with several of the Shadovar Princes and wasn't returned to the prime material plane until after the Phaerim were dealt with.

love it so very very much

Why doesn't Tanthul try begging Ranma for help? Attacking a god, or even a part of one, is rarely a wise plan even for a city full of archmages at full power. Shade is not at full power. Any victory would likely leave it unable to defend itself anyway. . .

Hah, Ranma has his own Jusenkyo, lol.

Not a bad story at all. I didn't know it existed until the latest update, and it took me until now to get it all read. You almost lost me when Ranma got divided up into his/her/its constituent parts, but I persevered and I'm glad I did. I'm definitely looking forward to the next update.

good story

Oh thank you thank you...a million times thank you! It is so good to see you writing again. I cherished the hope that you might one day return to continue your stories...but two years is a long time and i'd lost hope. I can't tell you how happy it made me to see that 09 in the update section.

That said this latest chapter has only fueled my interest in learning more about the Forgotten Realms. It's the one core DnD universe i've not played in and now i'm wishing i'd played in it and read more about it. Ah well I know the important bits. Great chapter!

I look forward to reading more of this story some time in the hopefully not to distant future. For now I will have to reread this story in its entirety while I wait with bated breath for an update of Progeny. That, more then anything, is what i've been yearning for.

Yay, welcome back! Great chapter, and glad to have one of the "old school" writers back. ^_^ Now, if only we could get Kenko to write. ^^;

Fun story, great to see you are still adding more.