Reviews for Star City, USA

Reviews For: Star City, USA - Reviews: Page 1 of 5

SageofAges729 2007-09-15 ch 4,	abuseBwahaha, this is awesome! I love the Eye of the Strom series as I call it. Keep up the great work!
alexiel-neesan 2007-07-17 ch 4,	abuseI've just finished the 'Eye of the storm' universe marathon - I loved it to pieces!! Thank you for writing this! I've had a lot of fun reading it, I even laughed in front of my computer (the Elite rocks it all!). So 'bravo' for your work, a stargeek from France
nightbug08 2007-03-08 ch 3, anon.	abuseThis is really good! I'd like to the other Star Wars guys reaction to us mormons! And what happens when we start sending missonaries to other worlds! "Mom I've been assigined to Naboo!" "Where's that honey?" hee hee1
phantom-jedi1 2007-02-22 ch 4,	abuseNice one! The irony at the end was well done. phantom_jedi
Mord-Sith Rahl 2006-12-04 ch 4,	abuseACK! I loved it. That was great. Poor Maul. Poor, poor deluded Maul. "slippery Kenobi" Heh. I hope you get more insperation for this set. I loved the universe, and it's been so long since you updated it. Aw. waves hand in a mimicking of the Jedi Mind Trick You will update soon. You will make me very happy. You will...give me another cookie! grins
Mord-Sith Rahl 2006-12-04 ch 3,	abuseHey! I'm back from Hell, or should I say school? Either way, I was looking forward to finishing these short tales here, and this one was so funny! Heehee, poor Elders. And Fett DEFFINATELY would be the type to purposely rattle them. He's so adorable! Aww...would pinch his cheek were he not wearing a helmet Oh well.
Mord-Sith Rahl 2006-12-04 ch 2,	abuseOkay I lied. But I'm seriously leaving now! This one was cute. Bai!
Mord-Sith Rahl 2006-12-04 ch 1,	abusemutters Alright, as long as you keep this spin-off going for a while, sigh, I should be fine. pitiful pout, puppy face galore It was really sweet, this one. And as I've mentioned before, sometimes I forget he's 'Vader' in his outfit, and othertimes it slams into me, and something he says or does, or the breathing with get at me and it makes the scene all that more hilarious. I know that if I were one of the reporters when he shouted I might have peed my pants...but I probably would have glomped him. Has the Dark Lord ever been glomped? I am unable to read any more tonight, so I don't know if he has, but that would be hilarious. Walking down the street, then suddenly rabid fan girls attacking him...poor, poor, former Dark Lord of the Sith...GOODNIGHT!
HyperCaz 2006-10-18 ch 4,	abuseLoving them all! omg totally got me with the last one - I wouldn't have reviewed otherwise! Hehe poor Austin and Sparky. I love your little 'verse, it always makes me giggle, hang on the edge of my seat and believe that it's ALL real. I believe. =)
SithSnoopy 2006-08-03 ch 4,	abuseGuest of Honor: Poor Vader! But I knew seeing the movie would just bring his kids, or at least Luke, closer to him, closer to understanding what went on. We all pay the price: I'm typing this at 2:45am when I should be asleep. Because I'm addicted to Star Wars and Star Wars Fanfic. Why is this ringing a scary bell? [Glad my husband is on travel and so I'm not keeping him up typing away...] Oh, I have always loved the song Cat's in the Cradle. :) Always makes me think of my Dad. He always worked insane hours. But the good thing is that he still made time for me on the weekends. The Elders: ROTFLOL! There Was Another: At first I totally thought Maul would figure out Vader had become his replacement. But I guess the arrogance of the Dark Side worked against him. :) Awesome stories!
realfanficts 2006-06-11 ch 4,	abuseOh, I like that! Very funny, even if that isn't what you intended!
Gandalf -Dumbledore -Obi-Wa... 2006-06-05 ch 3,	abuseAn elder who freaked out every time a Darth Maul impersonator or a woman in Slave Leia gear opened the door was generally an elder who would be transferred to a different area within the week. o, slave leia. poor missionaries. The man smiled wryly, as if he knew something the missionaries didn’t, and he herded his son out the back door. oh dear. poor missionaries. Hansen frowned. “Who’s Boba Fett?” :O “So tell me, Brother Fett… can we call you that?” snickers Brother Fett A thoughtful pause. “Yes,” he said finally. “Why do the two of you have the same bizarre first name?” dies “What the hell is the Bible?” interrupted Fett. i can just hear the fundementalist preparing to lynch. “If you expect me to believe an uneducated farm boy dug up an ancient book made of gold on a hillside,” Fett retorted, “then I expect you to believe that I’m not native to your planet and need more of an explanation.” dies ...again “A LITTLE?” muttered Fett. “If his head swelled anymore, he’d look like Ki-Adi-Mundi.” Cody fell on his side, clutching his ribs as he howled with laughter, and despite himself Brigham began chuckling too. “Kowdi-WHO?” demanded Hansen. XD Murphy froze, caught off guard. “Uh… we normally just call him God, or Eternal Father, or Heavenly Father…” “Or Jehovah,” added Cody. “Or Emmanuel, Rock of Ages, the Way and the Truth and the Light, the Lamb, Wonderful, Counselor, the Mighty God, the Everlasting Father, the Prince of Peace, Alpha and Omega, the Messiah, the Redeemer, the Holy One of Israel, King of the Jews, the Good Shepherd…” wow, he had more names than Voldemort! ...i can hear the fundementalists again... “Sounds as if your god has an identity crisis,” Fett noted. BAHAHAHAHAHA! Fett sheathed the blade. “I’ve heard enough,” he said. “I have no further interest in this religion. You can have your book back, Brigham.” poor missionaries. “Let me guess,” Hansen said in a condescending tone. “Fett brought friends here… say, Captain Spock or Ford Prefect?” OMG SPOCK! YEAH! Why, what’s behind me? Chewbacca?” He turned to look. Two men were standing behind the couch, eyeing him curiously – a young man in casual clothes with tousled blond hair and piercing blue eyes… and a foreboding figure in gleaming black whose every breath hissed balefully, a figure whom even those ignorant of science fiction could recognize and instantly fear… Hansen opened his mouth to say something, but it never came out. Instead, he slid off the couch and onto the floor. “Um, Elder Hansen?” Murphy said anxiously. “What’s his problem?” asked Luke. “Got me,” Cody replied with a shrug. “Probably had his britches on too tight, that’s all.” A throaty rumble issued from Vader’s mask, and Murphy shrunk back a little before realizing it was an amused chuckle. ...“You passed out and had to have Darth Vader dump a glass of ice water in your face?” i said it before and i'll say it again. poor missionaries. “I think you need to relax a little, Elder,” Murphy retorted. “It could’ve been worse. It could’ve been the ‘Lord of the Rings’ crew.” you do realize that you need to write an LOTR one now. you CAN'T put that idea in my head and refuse to write it.
Gandalf -Dumbledore -Obi-Wa... 2006-06-05 ch 4,	abuseThis sector of space was alleged to be the most dangerous in the galaxy – ships were rumored to enter and never return, or were later found abandoned or their occupants driven mad. Few enough braved this place, and fewer still lived to tell about it. yes, sith-man, fear the earthlings! ...especially the Qui-Gonn fans... “I know my Austin’s a sensitive boy…” OMG XD “All I can say is this ‘Star Wars’ bull-honkie’d better blow over quick,” complained an older man ahead of the two women, who was obviously there only to chaperone his own sons. “Bunch of nonsense if you ask me…” :O NO! Intrigued by now, Maul cut discreetly in line about halfway up, silencing the irate complaint of the person behind him with a jab of the dark side. What exactly was this phenomenon that had people willing to wait hours to witness it? And did it have anything to do with his mission? hehehehe... At the head of the line, something else piqued his curiosity – a flat image of some kind upon the wall. In the foreground was shown a young man and woman, the former holding a blazing lightsaber to the sky like a torch, the latter clad in a white dress, posing in a seductive manner, and firing a blaster at the ground for some unevident reason. oh gawd no i HATE that version of the poster... and a teenage couple who seemed more interested in some preliminary mating ritual than in the screen. fools. they don't know what they're missing. That led to one conclusion – this was Maul’s apprentice. He felt a dark smile cross his lips. So this WAS the future, then. This was a time when he would take on the mantle of Master – and eventually Emperor – from Sidious. This was a time when HE would rule the galaxy, when HE would govern the Sith Order… and with it, the galaxy. And it would be HIS apprentice that struck down the Jedi Order once and for all… and at Maul’s command. The very thought of it filled him with a savage joy. wow. good thing this wasn't Menace, or he might get kinda mad. And then I will find this Vader… and I will see to that thermal exhaust port and that slippery Kenobi… LEAVE OBI-WAN ALONE! ...ahem... A year later, of course, Maul would be very surprised to find his grandiose plans cut short by the saber of the “slippery Kenobi.” hahahahahahaha. :P And twenty years after THAT, as the Vader’s Elite fan club viewed a midnight showing of “Episode I,” Austin Owen Powers and Ryan “Sparky” O’Brian would wonder why on Earth they both kept getting the willies whenever Darth Maul showed his face onscreen. snickers ah... another wonderful story / chapter / oneshot / whatever thingy. i know you must hear this 24/7, but update soon! ^^
Crow T R0bot 2006-06-05 ch 4,	abuseDamn, these vignettes were awesome. Especially this most recent one with the brash, arrogant Maul...and lethally naive at that one. You sure screwed up this time didn't you Maul? The missionary scene was impressive too. “If you expect me to believe an uneducated farm boy dug up an ancient book made of gold on a hillside,” Fett retorted, “then I expect you to believe that I’m not native to your planet and need more of an explanation.” And the column about how Star Wars affected Austin's life was bittersweet to say the least. P.S. Have you ever played "Star Wars: Knights Of The Old Republic?" I figured it was worth mentioning, as it's the only Star Wars story better than all 6 movies combined. The reason I bring it up is that, if possible, do you think maybe one of your next vignettes could revolve around the thoughts of one of SW characters on KOTOR? I can't even begin to think of the possibilities, like did any of it happen? And if so, how the heck do you explain the varied appearances (and even gender) of Revan? Tell me what you think in a review response whether you plan to or not.
Clone Trooper 2006-06-05 ch 4,	abuseAahaha!! That was great!! Poor Maul, though... Thinks he's gonna be the Emperor. "He curled his lip in a snarl, just for added effect. It worked beautifully – both boys fled, shrieking, into the dimming evening." Maul, you bad, evil Zabrak!! :P Great job, Kenya!

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