Well. I liked it at first I really did. The end, not so much. I'm terribly sorry but this is marked as a romance story and there's barely any romance in it. I so wanted Connor and Andrea to end up together. Did they? I waited for some sort of moment between them but it never came, Connor blurting out that he loves her does not count. I liked the idea but it lacked the romance I was hoping for.

-Snuffles-sweetie

Hey this was one of the best stories I have ever read! It was funny and serious at the same time, plus with the way you worded Connor, Murphy, and their Da's comments and conversations it actually sounded like them, I could hear their voices in my head as I was reading it. Good work!

I just started this chapter and i love the story so far. Connor is so sweet and Murphy is an awesome friend to Andrea, it's all around briliant!

I just have one question. Who's Kat? I'm reading the second section underneath the 'o's and it kind of confused me. I don't know if you meant 'Da' or if it's Andrea's new name to go along with her look?

The story turned out great! i would love an epilogue though. But if your muse is gone I can understand that.

Nicely done. glad that andrea's back.

So yeah. She did make it through, and that's good. The last chapter was confusing to me, but thi sone is better. It ties the events of the last one with what's going on now. Please update soon!

Maggie

Absolutely loved it! It wasn't confusing at all. I am still so loving this story. Can't wait for an update.

I know I may be a bit redundant...but it was a huge plot shift when Andrea died. It was confusing. Anyways, always looking forawrd to the next chapter.

GAH...NO ANDREA's. you better bring her back or elsa . But seriously Why isnt chapter 19 finished? GASP IT STOPS AT "Wh"

I was hoping that you didn't kill her...But it still was a shock. Love it though. Update very soon please.

I can't believe you killed Andrea! OMG please, please, please update ASAP!

Emotional cliffhanger! Nice. I've been keeping track of your story, it's well written, but not updated enough! Keep writing!

Sorry for the "constructive criticism" but I really like this. It sucks having to wait for what happens next. lol.

-M

Yay. I loved it. The idea fit in perfectly here! Can't wait for more.

Ireally like this story. There are a few gramatical errors but otherwise pretty excllent. I like that you have a somewhat complicated plot, though I feel that by putting Da and Murph out of the scene you will now have to put in secens with what they are doing so that it evens out the "playing feild" so to speak. I would like to see where this goes so please keep writing.

Kit-t-Rex

hey. i'm really liking this story, no loving it! Andrea's brother, Evan, reminds me of my best friend Evan :P lol

though it'll be pretty cool to see Connor and Andrea into a little action. :P