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| digi-writer1392 2007-09-09 ch 2,  | abuseWow. This was amazingly well written, and really sad. |
| breakdown156 2006-06-18 ch 2, | abuseYou should make a sequal where Odd comes back from the dead again. |
| breakdown156 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abusethat was kinda dark and morbid |
| H.Kage09 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abusefreaking awsome |
| Dragon C. Chan 2006-02-23 ch 2, | abuse^_^ I like it! |
| H.Kage09 2006-02-12 ch 2, | abusethat was a good story, |
| D Wolf Falls 2005-12-06 ch 2, | abuseAgain, awesome job. 10/10. Amazing, absolutly amazing. The amount of emotion present was just indescribable. When you come up with something, you really make it work. |
| D Wolf Falls 2005-12-06 ch 1, | abuseUgh, it's taken me way to long to get to reading this. But, as you know I've been busy. :( But I have a free night tonight! :) So I'm catching up on a few things. Awesome job. Two thumbs way up. You wrote this from every possible angle in Jeremie's mind nad you did an awesome job at it. Now, on to chapter 2! |
| Amber Skye 2005-11-24 ch 2, | abuseAw!! I've always rather liked these kinds of moments in movies and such, where you get the see the dead person again in spirit form. It's always touching and emotional and always bittersweet angsty, because you know you really will never see them again. You wrote it so well, too. You're right, it IS the kind of thing Odd would do. You just made it fit his character perfectly. Oh, I loved it when Jeremie finally broke down and cried! Ah, but the best line was right before Odd left: "Some guilt will always remain, Jeremie. But it doesn't have to rule you." That's so perfect, and so true! So basically...I loved it! I'm really glad you made it into a two-parter, it works so well. Awesomeness, as always!! |
| Amber Skye 2005-11-24 ch 1, | abuseOh, so angsty and dark. I loved that one line, "The burns on my hands, from XANA's power, made it easier for them to believe that I'd tried to help him." So ironic!! Definitely reading the second chapter now... C= |
| Fallen Star Rises 2005-11-17 ch 2, | abuseBravo! I loved this fanfic so much. 10 out of 10 ^_^ |
| Cybra 2005-11-17 ch 2, | abuseYou already know my thoughts on this story, but I'll type them here anyway. Exceptionally well-written. The emotion is just incredible. You can really feel Jeremy's guilt and his inability to move on in both chapters. How you had Odd come back in the second chapter and help him move past it all was brilliantly done. Jeremy will probably never fully forgive himself, but at least he can get up and keep going. Excellent fic. Definitely going on my favorites. ~Cybra |
| MystDragon2k 2005-11-05 ch 2, | abuseAnother one of your moving stories stikes my heart. At least you didn't mess with Aileta this time...and at least we had a happy ending...i'm still scared from "Freedom dosn't always mean Free". Good job though, 9/10. |
| RioDios 2005-11-03 ch 2, | abuseoh man. the tears are comin. wiat wait wait. SOB! this was so great! i can't belive it! i love this fic! you can just feel what it's like for Jeremy. Such awsome work! |
| lyokolady 2005-11-03 ch 2, | abuseYou rally are a brilliant writer. I've never been one to read angst because I myself think a lot of the people who write it aren't very good. But you, you are an excellent author and I hope you continue to write. Eragon4Life |