Wow great! I really liked it

wow, amazing job. very well done.

What can I say, other then excellent. You really capture what these characters mean to each other so well.

I love it. you truly have tallent. Keep using it.

Aw...that's really sad...wonderful job! The format kinda reminds me of one of my stories, but it isn't half as good as this one...Do you mind reading one and giving me some tips? You story is really wonderful! Great job!