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Verity L
2009-04-10 . chapter 7
It's probably been a while since you've gotten a review, but I just have to say some things. This story actually reminded me a bit of myself, in the beginning. Scared about seeing someone years later after it ended badly... yup, that's me. I love the way both happy emotions and depressing emotions were put into this story.

Keep up the good work! ^^
syNemYoA
2008-06-15 . chapter 7
hmm,.,. actually,.,.
emotions do trigger those two to come out,.,. but
from what i remember from watching the anime before,.,.
ONCE Satoshi's and Daisuke's love for their Sacred Maidens were returned,.,. Dark and Krad will no longer come out,.,. :)
just pointing that out,.,. *smile sheepishly*
'DalisaY-17'
2008-01-05 . chapter 7
This is why I luurve your works! I really love your descriptions and the slight OOC-nesses. It adds a little kick to your stories. Hope you keep it all up!

Ganbatte to ganbatte!
Kid9535
2007-06-11 . chapter 7
Oh, so you were the one who wrote this fiction. I remember reading it last year when I didn't have an account. I faved all the fictions I read into my favourtie websites. Then towards the end of the year, I transferred some fictions (well, most) into my computer and changed all the grammatical errors so I could read and reread. I'm weird like that. I think yours was one of 'em, but I didn't plagarise. I never do. Good story. :)I liked the part where you explain Satoshi's routine.
IcedOverFire
2007-05-02 . chapter 7
My god, I love your story! Thank the gods that you didn't make it into a oneshot!
Keza22
2007-04-25 . chapter 7
Aw... that was lovely ^^ Really lovely. Very well written and so meaningful - well done ^.^
Sora
2007-04-09 . chapter 7
Another great story with my favourite DN Angel couple ^^.
Wind Scythe
2007-03-17 . chapter 1
The ending was so sad >.< But the chapter was still awesome! ^__^ I don't know how Krad transformed into Satoshi again though... Oh well
midnitefaeri
2007-02-02 . chapter 7
I LUVED IT! i luv how you can write this as a short story but not rush it! normally, when a story is short its a bit rushed, but this one wasn't!
midnitefaeri
2007-02-02 . chapter 2
definitely yay! so, he's saw risa! now, i will read the next chappie to find out wat awkward convo takes place!
midnitefaeri
2007-02-02 . chapter 1
OMG! it is so beautiful! if i had read this when it was still a one shot i would have so encouraged you to continue!
naoko
2006-12-20 . chapter 7
So, I doesn't believe that I haven"t rewied be favorite fanFic so sry and here it is: I like the oneshot as well as the whole story. both can stands for it's own but yo need both to understand him and her. so, also I herard a little bit weird I like the story ^^
Mika3103
2006-11-08 . chapter 7
asome!asome!asome!asome!asome!asome!asome! i must say im speechless to say... that was so sweet!
ThePowerOfBrownies
2006-10-03 . chapter 1
i love this its kinda sad but oh wells
mysterymaiden7
2006-09-22 . chapter 7
As much as I loved the first chapter (you're right, not all stories are able to have happy endings)and as much as I thought it would have made a spectaculor one-shot, I must say that I'm glad you continued the story. It would have been cruel to leave Satoshi alone for the rest of his life. He deserves someone like Risa to help him overcome Krad's evil.
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