that was good, but I don't understand how Kard was overcome.

Oh God, that was so sweet! love it!

I like the way you portray Risa. She's so lovable.
Poor Satoshi, I wonder if there is a way out of this nightmare for him. I am impatient to find out.

Poor Boy. I can just imagine how his life would have went if Krad did not leave him.

You caught the character very well. I wonder how you managed that?! awesome

This is FABULOUS! Five stars! 10 thumbps UP! and FAVORITED!
to me, it was perfect!

It's probably been a while since you've gotten a review, but I just have to say some things. This story actually reminded me a bit of myself, in the beginning. Scared about seeing someone years later after it ended badly... yup, that's me. I love the way both happy emotions and depressing emotions were put into this story.

Keep up the good work! ^^

hmm,.,. actually,.,.
emotions do trigger those two to come out,.,. but
from what i remember from watching the anime before,.,.
ONCE Satoshi's and Daisuke's love for their Sacred Maidens were returned,.,. Dark and Krad will no longer come out,.,. :)
just pointing that out,.,. *smile sheepishly*

This is why I luurve your works! I really love your descriptions and the slight OOC-nesses. It adds a little kick to your stories. Hope you keep it all up!

Ganbatte to ganbatte!

Oh, so you were the one who wrote this fiction. I remember reading it last year when I didn't have an account. I faved all the fictions I read into my favourtie websites. Then towards the end of the year, I transferred some fictions (well, most) into my computer and changed all the grammatical errors so I could read and reread. I'm weird like that. I think yours was one of 'em, but I didn't plagarise. I never do. Good story. :)I liked the part where you explain Satoshi's routine.

My god, I love your story! Thank the gods that you didn't make it into a oneshot!

Aw... that was lovely ^^ Really lovely. Very well written and so meaningful - well done ^.^

Another great story with my favourite DN Angel couple ^^.

The ending was so sad >.< But the chapter was still awesome! ^__^ I don't know how Krad transformed into Satoshi again though... Oh well

I LUVED IT! i luv how you can write this as a short story but not rush it! normally, when a story is short its a bit rushed, but this one wasn't!

definitely yay! so, he's saw risa! now, i will read the next chappie to find out wat awkward convo takes place!