Wonderful...
Absolutely wonderful... This is amazing... You got bored didn't you... Well even if you dind't this was great... I liked it, its showed remorse and depression... not that i like thme, but it fit the mood...
Nice job Dogedoos...

Toodles,
Deep Shadows
"Your freindly Neighborhood Triscuit"

Thanks everyone. I'm sorry to say, but this was just a one-shot for Halloween. Glad you liked it!

Seems good so far. Is this a one-shot?

Very good! Will you continue? Oh please do.

Nice story. Poor Severus, I just wanted to pick him up off the floor and give him a hug... and a warm bath... and... well, you know me. :P Great work!

very well written. Thanks!
-j

I like it, it's quite detailed.