|Reviews for Fruit Salad|
| topoftheiceberg 6/16/07 . chapter 1
here's a short one... :D
it was just great figuring out which one to choose next... I'm looking through the summaries and it's like: Chase/Cam, Chase... Cam, Cam... Chase, and on and on, sickening
to tell you the truth it's not exactly the idea of Cam and Chase, but rather Chase. for some odd reason I just don't like his character as much. Jesse Spencer's great but I think of all the characters he has the least depth
First sentence of the story. I was like wha? I totally saw "Cuddy's POV" but it took me like three times to realize what exactly was going on. And now I can officially say that I absolutely love your metaphors. Wow. I thought the marshmellow one was hilarious and perfect. And then I saw these. Woot!
As far as marshmellows go, it was a while back something about being sickening sweet and shoving them in a fire where they get crunchy or something. I just remember the shoving in a fire and the fact that I had been compared to a marshmellow. And bananas. Laughed at Cam's comparison. I've been told I'm yellow on the outside (Asian), white on the inside. So true.
| EvanescentBeauty 1/21/07 . chapter 1
Aww! That's so cute!
| LadyEmera1d 1/15/07 . chapter 1
aw omgod this story is so adorable and original.
now whenever I see Foreman, I can't help picturing a tomato. lol. you made my day :)
| solitarydreamsattwilight 12/31/06 . chapter 1
Hehe, absolutely LOVED this line: "He's hard core, just like an apple." Very funny!
That line reminded me about some video thing I saw the other day...you should check it out so funny!
Here - go to:
Well - this has been a very strange review so...cya!
| icefirestar 5/12/06 . chapter 1
Hey! (I just can't stop reviewing)
This hilarious, Fruit Salad! :D What happens if you put them in the blender and mix them together? You should make a sequel but with them as vegetables.
Keep your writing spirit up!
Btw:I just added to your forum, "A letter to Jennifer" I like it.
| thisaccounthasbeendeactivated 5/7/06 . chapter 1
...I get the feeling you were bored when you wrote this...
| Infusiion 4/19/06 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAHA! this was so cute!
"cameron's a banana" that sentence made me laugh! it was just so... abrupt.
foreman - "an odd piece of fruit... yet there he is" ALSO made me laugh.
this whole fic was short, sweet, and made perfect sense!
| Andral 3/18/06 . chapter 1
Who is the first person? Maybe I'm just stupid, I liked this short story. Write more and I'll read. :)
| Penname0000 11/27/05 . chapter 1
That was really original. The comparisons were great. :)
| macaday me a nut 11/4/05 . chapter 1
That is so cute! I loved it! That Wilson thing at the end. AW
macaday me a nut (and your one too!)
| JamiesFanGirl 11/3/05 . chapter 1
Actually, Miss Know-It-All Ali is wrong.
There is a type of cactus that is sort of pear-shaped, hence its name: prickly pear.
So you were really on the right track, m'dear!
| Hisoka B 11/3/05 . chapter 1
Hehehe, I like the metaphors you used. _ Nice work.
| Moixx 11/1/05 . chapter 1
Loved it! Great idea with the fruits. This is going on my favourites list .
| livetoeat06 11/1/05 . chapter 1
lol funny story...::stomach growls:: now you've made me hungry lol...hmm cuddy/wilson? interesting pairing...
| Alipeeps 11/1/05 . chapter 1
I struggled with this I'm afraid. There's an awful lot of grammatical errors which make it difficult to read. The sentence "She has so many hidden secret that, at first guess, would be impossible to tell she even had." is very badly constructed - you can just about graps what you were trying to say but it's terrible clunky.
And I'm afraid I'm just not getting the characterisation here - I think you're reaching rather in your attempts to describe each of them as a fruit. Foreman's description in particular pretty much makes no sense.
Oh and the reason the saying is "as prickly as a pear" is because there is a type of pair that is "prickly" or spiney. You ever seen The Jungle Book? In "The Bare Necessities" Baloo sings "Don't pick the prickly pear by paw, if you pick a pear try to use the claw" :D