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| Marion the Geek 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abuseThis story made me squeak with the cuteness. Great. |
| Katie 2006-02-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis. Is. AWESOME. |
| hbfdn 2006-02-07 ch 1, anon. | abusecute |
| Pebbled Sky 2005-12-23 ch 1, | abuseOh lord, I melted- MELTED- when I read this. Spot on characterization, great detail without being cluttered, and a fluffy ending. This is an awesome story, no doubt about it. {Pebbles} |
| Anutheal 2005-11-02 ch 1, | abuseAw...that is so cute. I don't think I have ever read anything so adorable. Thanks for writing it, I'm a little late for Halloween stories, but it's cute, and who cares. Halloween is great (even if it poored the whole time I was out)Anyway, loved it. |
| Muskoka Girl 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abuseAww that really cheered me up after the crap day I had. Too bad this didn't show up on the site yesterday!! |
| TriStateCopFan 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abuseVery cute ~ there's no way he could've resisted going along, right? As for whether she did it for Bobby or herself, I think it's a bit of both. Considering Bobby's sad childhood, he probably doesn't have too many fond Halloween memories past the age of 7, so hopefully he had fun too. Sweet of her to include him. |
| Adina-Anne 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abuseOh damn that was cute! I like the Angel/Devil idea there. But my favorite part had to be young Alex dressed as a cop. Talk about foreshadowing... :) |
| Msynergy 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Lol. An angel and a devil, right? What are the odds? Hee Hee. Very good festive story. |
| JuJuBeezzz 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuseLOL! OMG! This is funny story! I Love it! |
| gerfan 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuseLike your story, I could visually picture Bobby's jaw dropping when he saw Alex in her costume, LOL!! I like it that she was went as the Angel and he went as the devil, I like the the ending line. Great work!! Put me in the holiday spirit!! I also think it was neat about Alex's memories trick or treating as a kid. You made it very realistic. Like the humor. Hope you had a fun and Happy Halloween!! |