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| Kou Haruko 2008-01-07 ch 3, | abuse(T_T) i'll be very sad if you don't continue this. You don't want me to be sad do you? DO you? (LOL) |
| Alanna-Sama 2007-10-18 ch 3, | abusecha.good story |
| shinnehmachobaklito 2007-06-05 ch 3, | abuseyey! renji tatsuki forever! who! gosh i love them.. |
| Time and Fate 2007-03-25 ch 3, | abusehuh, i like this, i think you should write some more |
| BlackBrightField2007 2007-02-01 ch 3, | abusenice story! |
| Jeikobu Kyoudai-teiru 2007-01-21 ch 3, | abuseplease update soon! |
| Silent Kunoichi aka. Fiona 2006-12-06 ch 3, | abusePAMS(Please add more soon |
| Somnus 2006-08-03 ch 3, | abusehey hey! this is one of the best fanfics i've ever read in :) i'm so hooked up.. i wonder what's going to happen next..? i do hope you'll write more.. you absolutely have talent. i'll be looking forward to reading more of your work.. take care. |
| Somnus 2006-08-03 ch 2, | abusethat was amazing. the fighting sequence simply blew me away! i especially loved how you switched from character pov to action scenes. i held my breath throughout the chappie :P the scenes were very easy to imagine.. it's as if i was watching the anime itself. got to love the details, as well as the un-ooc. you rock. |
| Somnus 2006-08-03 ch 1, | abuseyour story inspired me to read the manga :P i was following the soul society arc in the anime.. but decided to jump ahead when i encountered the word allankar :P anyway, it was a great prologue! got to love the humor in it :P i see you paid a lot of attention to details.. which is really excellent! it drew the reader, yours truly, into the story :) great cliffhanger! :) i'm off to read the next chapter.. later! |
| Kaikai PANTS 2006-01-04 ch 3, | abuseGood stuff! Update soon plz |
| BloodHeron 2006-01-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseGood story! Looking forward to reading more of it. |
| flOofymikO 2005-12-27 ch 3, | abuseAws!! This was really very good! I loved every bit of it ^_^. Aww...I wish you would continue this story and make it longer...but that's okay. I await your epilogue. Tt's really a very good story and I love how you portray Renji and Tatsuki and the subtle thoughts and feelings they have. The action is well-written, too ^_^. Okie doke...hurry and update, please! Yay for RenTatsu =3 |
| Lady Light 2005-12-24 ch 3, | abuseWai! Please update this! |
| Kryssa 2005-12-09 ch 3, | abuseVery nice to see that there are repercussions for battling, among the Shinigami and the normals. Many battle scenes that I have read - be they in novels or fanfiction - seem to forget that there are such things as ~innocent bystanders~ and ~property damage~. My favorite moment in this chapter was the simple image of Renji carrying Tatsuki in his arms, despite how tired he was. The thought of him falling asleep with a silly little smile on his face because of Tatsuki did warm my heart, I must say. And, perhaps because I'm new to this anime, this question will seem silly, but I thought that allankars (sp?) were more powerful than captains. So how did Renji beat his allankar up so easily ? Yeah, okay; releasing bankai isn't easy, but it was a one-hit wonder. But maybe I'm just nit-picking. While I do enjoy long stories, it's refreshing to read a well-written short story (as intended, at least). Can't wait for the last chapter. Jaa, mata! |