Good but can you do better than that. I sure as hell can. You write like a Navy Brat

Ah, fluffy sweetness. After all the bad fanfic Forro has run into tonight, this definitely satisfied my craving for a well written, Harm and Mac oriented story. I had to search for this gem, mind you, but I’m glad I came across it.

Usually, straight up fluff is almost too sweet for me, but you’ve threaded together such a nice mix of fun, romance and confectionary goodness that I couldn’t go past this without leaving my gratitude. Usually, I come across fanfics and have so much to say, but with you it’s different. With you, all I want to say is thank you.

I thank you for proper grammar. I thank you for following canon. I thank you for keeping Harm and Mac true to themselves without reducing them to hormonal teenagers. Stories like this are hard to come by on this website unless you look very hard. I’ll be sure to keep an eye out for more of your work.

Regards,
Forro

OMG, that was so cute. I loved it. It's been so long since I've watched JAG or read JAG fanfic, but this made my night. Great stuff. Thanks!

This is what should have happened after Jagathon!! Thanks for the smile!

I loved this story.

great story.

Great story with the ending i love.

Loved this story, as I do all the others you have written. Can't wait to read more! Melissa

That was cute! I loved it!

I really enjoyed your little story. Great job.

Ah, I loved that - what a wonderful way to start my day! Thank you very much!

loved it more please

Absolutely beautiful. I can totally see Harm and Mac doing this on the show. Please continue offering realistic JAG fiction!

Enjoyed this :) Thanks for posting!