i love the ending, i wonder if she will chat with archer?

oh dear, what do they want? im worried now.

i don't know what he can do, but i am pretty sure he will side with his crew!

at least hoshi si seeing some sense...

but i understand their concerns

that must have been one scary haircut!

i love trip!

i want it in the meat grinder as well, but she is right, it isnt going to happen

i knew it!

i loved hoshi and liz's wee fight.

Dina is in danger isnt she?

im not sure i trust these people all that much... 7 foot tall and all... good things come in small packages!

Great story! I don't know if in "real life" a woman could actually get hit so often in the face (or even a man) and still keep fighting but as part of a story it was okay to have it.

Also, I don't think, that after what happened, Archer would have let Saal on the tour without letting Dina know first and have her stay in her quarters instead of being surprised like that.

Overall, though, a really interesting story that I enjoyed reading a lot.

Entertaining story! Is Archer gonna find someone. I think a certain Vulcan seems to be available.

At any rate, this is fun and I'm glad you're having such a ball taking "canon" and linking it into TOS canon.

WELL DONE INDEED!

Goddess Anjanee :)

Update soon.

I want to know what kind of agreement that will be reached for the trade of the topaline.

Goddess Anjanee :)

And it begins!

The crew will not stand for this. All Adm. Black is concerned about is the topaline. He just may throw all the female crewmembers to the wolves (Capellans).

I hope the captain has a plan to rid themselves of the rapist and his people before crewmembers decide to destroy the aliens and take the ore by force.

PS, update soon!

Goddess Anjanee :)

Well done indeed!

Goddess Anjanee :)