please continue? that's all I'm going to say.

Argh! I was so mad when I got to the end of oneshot. You know why? Because there was no more! I think you should keep writing.

are you update =]

I wish you WOULD make this a continuing story! It was beautifully written, and it's one of the few fics capable of reminding us why this pairing works. You've captured their personalities without making him seem like a complete joke, and I'm completely enamored of you. Beautifully done!

Haha. OMG. You probably forgot this exist. Anyway, just thought i'd drop a review letting you know that I enjoyed reading it.

cheers!!

omg! i luv it! e! plz update soon :D

Hey I really liked your story. I think that you understood the characters well and the little ways you tweaked them added more to their relationship. keep writing! ^^

vary hot!!

waaH~! pls continue this stOry~! sO nIcE~!

a little more sexually explicit story would be much appreciated. i think you're going the right way with this fic because although ryoki acts touch he really does love her the way you wrote it. keep up the good work :)

actually, ryouki's good at heart. it's just that he never shows it :)

wow...completely awesome. most IC ryoki and hatsumi ever. SO good, there is not enough well written ryohatsu around...PLEASE CONTINUE!

Omg! So far out of all the Hot Gimmick fan fics I have read yours is the best. I think you should make a next chapter and another one ... and another etc until you have like 100 chapters :P.

Theres any OOC in the characters. You described exactly how they act towards eachother. Great!

I like that it had emotion and made me want to know what happened next