 Junsui Chikyuu 2006-10-13 . chapter 4god, so sad! but good, very good. Happy to be reading! |
 -PandorasKitten- 2005-12-28 . chapter 6wow...i am at lost of words and astonished but jealous of your ability to write but i guess that every artist has their own way of expressing themselves and sadly mines is visual arts. |
 ChiisanaAnisa 2005-12-27 . chapter 6You know Hououza recommended this to me and I'm so glad he did. I simply enjoyed every each one of these drabbles, short stories.
I think you pulled every character magnificently, specially Naruto in #2, I mean.. Wow.
However I liked the last one the most so far. It kept me up and up and then brough me down with the last line so hard I felt as if it was me lying on my back, and not Sasuke. Amazing.
I do encourage you to write more, doesn't matter if you do so here or with new stories, because you have a special way with words which I already fell in love with.
Love,
Anisa |
 Hououza 2005-12-26 . chapter 6Magnificent chapter.
I would have thought that a concluding chapter but I secretly hope there will be more to this but still that was a moving conclusion to the tale. Sakura finally ending their trials, putting the endless cirlce to an end.
I look forwards to seeing what else you have in store.
Good luck & best wishes,
Hououza |
 Hououza 2005-12-05 . chapter 5Very dark chapter.
An interesting way of framing it.
Good luck & best wishes,
Hououza |
 Hououza 2005-11-17 . chapter 3Darker story than before, an interesting concept, using his back as a metaphore.
Beautiful yet sad story.
Good luck & best wishes,
Hououza |
 6StringSamurai13 2005-11-02 . chapter 2Holy cow...that was awesome. Naruto usually isn't who you think of when you want to write a introspective piece, but he really does need it. He's more than an idiot, and he definitely has a lot of baggage to deal with. I thought this chapter was a really great look at how his relationship with Hinata would end up. He likes her, but she's no sakura. Great work, I can't wait for the next chapter. |
 -PandorasKitten- 2005-11-02 . chapter 2that is so sad...I think Hinata would rather him tell her straight-up that he cant love her than to find out he is only pretending and it is an obligation. I think that type of pain would be a lot worse. |
 Tombadgerlock 2005-11-02 . chapter 2ah, so the medic is hinata-ouch:/
Don't usualy like hinata as a medic, but that's alright.
Good luck for writing this, it's good :-)
a bit sad though, but there it goes :/ |
 Hououza 2005-11-02 . chapter 2Beautiful chapter once again.
Good luck & best wishes,
Hououza |
 WolfBane2 2005-11-01 . chapter 1Could have had a better ending. But I liked the line, "He is never a danger to her, in any case" because it seems to me that Sakura alone would not be afraid of Naruto or Sasuke, ever. (gives author a taco. Wanders off) |
 Hououza 2005-11-01 . chapter 1Beuatiful story.
Good luck & best wishes,
Hououza |