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Reviews for: Regrets
Junsui Chikyuu
2006-10-13 . chapter 4
god, so sad! but good, very good. Happy to be reading!
-PandorasKitten-
2005-12-28 . chapter 6
wow...i am at lost of words and astonished but jealous of your ability to write but i guess that every artist has their own way of expressing themselves and sadly mines is visual arts.
ChiisanaAnisa
2005-12-27 . chapter 6
You know Hououza recommended this to me and I'm so glad he did. I simply enjoyed every each one of these drabbles, short stories.

I think you pulled every character magnificently, specially Naruto in #2, I mean.. Wow.

However I liked the last one the most so far. It kept me up and up and then brough me down with the last line so hard I felt as if it was me lying on my back, and not Sasuke. Amazing.

I do encourage you to write more, doesn't matter if you do so here or with new stories, because you have a special way with words which I already fell in love with.

Love,

Anisa
Hououza
2005-12-26 . chapter 6
Magnificent chapter.

I would have thought that a concluding chapter but I secretly hope there will be more to this but still that was a moving conclusion to the tale. Sakura finally ending their trials, putting the endless cirlce to an end.

I look forwards to seeing what else you have in store.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
Hououza
2005-12-05 . chapter 5
Very dark chapter.

An interesting way of framing it.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
Hououza
2005-11-17 . chapter 3
Darker story than before, an interesting concept, using his back as a metaphore.

Beautiful yet sad story.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
6StringSamurai13
2005-11-02 . chapter 2
Holy cow...that was awesome. Naruto usually isn't who you think of when you want to write a introspective piece, but he really does need it. He's more than an idiot, and he definitely has a lot of baggage to deal with. I thought this chapter was a really great look at how his relationship with Hinata would end up. He likes her, but she's no sakura. Great work, I can't wait for the next chapter.
-PandorasKitten-
2005-11-02 . chapter 2
that is so sad...I think Hinata would rather him tell her straight-up that he cant love her than to find out he is only pretending and it is an obligation. I think that type of pain would be a lot worse.
Tombadgerlock
2005-11-02 . chapter 2
ah, so the medic is hinata-ouch:/
Don't usualy like hinata as a medic, but that's alright.
Good luck for writing this, it's good :-)
a bit sad though, but there it goes :/
Hououza
2005-11-02 . chapter 2
Beautiful chapter once again.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
WolfBane2
2005-11-01 . chapter 1
Could have had a better ending. But I liked the line, "He is never a danger to her, in any case" because it seems to me that Sakura alone would not be afraid of Naruto or Sasuke, ever. (gives author a taco. Wanders off)
Hououza
2005-11-01 . chapter 1
Beuatiful story.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
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