Original story I like it, Naruto was too bitchy, really I was almost sorry for Sasuke
I love Sasuke's note (Do not freak out) for Naruto *laugh* that was too funny, the smelly Twinkies too *laugh*

Cute! Nice and original!

lolz XD i was cracking up the whole time i was reading

OMG!! LOL! i love naruto in all his mod swing!!XD oh, and the Twinkies' thing was hilarious! no one can resist a twinkie!!XD

well i had really great fun reading your story. Naruto was very funny when he was yelling at Sasuke and then at Lee. It was also funny whne he talked about the Twinkies. That was just classic. I wished that the Sasuke was more expressive when he saw his kids but now that i look back at it, the ending fits the story even if it was abrupt.

MAKE MORE OR DEIDARA WILL BLOW YOU UP!

OMFG! so HOT!! write MOREE!! ..or I'll eat your brain :)

OMG! I loved it!

Yay! I'm done reading :D Aww poor Sasuke,Naruto really have very bad mood swings. TQ for writing this, I enjoyed it.^^ You're funny,btw.:D Those three little boys...surely they'll be the cutest babies ever =p

Yes,I like it! *squeal~!!* LOL,kidding..but yeah,I like it. Thank God Sasuke is smart. Hehehe,and I'm so happy,so far,..specially with Sasuke's reaction. He SO wanna be a father =p OK,on with the next chappie.

lol haha, I laughed so hard reading this chapter XD lol

Keep up the great work!

lol, Aww poor Sasuke. Good thing Sakura didn't damage Naruto otherwise there would be no other way to revive the Uchiha clan XD

Keep up the great work!

Great story! I loved the Twinkie part!

O_o That was great but a bit shocking lol! ^_^

OMFG!! NAKED LADY! nice ending!