its nice. the title gives meaning to what takes place in the story. the endine could use a bit of improvement, but you can still leave it at that. great work.:)

No way am I a fan of Lacus! Go FllayxKira! Nice fic by the way, I think this is what would actually happen if Kira told Lacus he loved her..

...Well. I find myself very confused, and vaguely unsettled. Another excellent, well-written story.

Er, if it isn't too plebian of me, would you mind sharing some of your intentions about this story?