GOD PLEACE DONT STOP! THE NEXT CHAPTER PLEACE OR I WILL DIE WITH OUT IT! Your story is wonderfule! i have never read any thing like it that can truely compare to it. if i may make an opption for you for the story then you can use it or not. but cant you have shal see glimsess of her till next oh hollows eve. Love the story.

interesting i like it please continue

hey man don't let us hanging! lol plz wat happens nxt? will shal ever find the mysteryous woman aka emma??plz plz keep on writing

This was a really good story. I think a sequal's in order!

MORE MORE MORE MORE! I loved it! Your writing style is incredible and just draws the people who reads the story into it. Please write more chapters! :D

Ooh...you are a devil for the leaving off just when it's getting interesting...I hope you are going to write more for this one!
Anyway, loved it as I do most of your works, looking forward to future updates from you.
Jay

really good it better be just the begining i want to read more. good job