please update soon this is a great story

great story. can't ait to read more. please continue soon.

i loved it please kee writeing

Aw, Aqualad's flying lesson was so cute. I really enjoyed it.

You have a great idea, but the story is rushed. Take time to give the characters depth and personaltiy. I feel that there isn't much to the characters you introduced, they felt two dimentional. The plot and setting are paper thin as well. Think of all five senses when working on the setting touch, smell, sight and so on. The plot looks ok, but slow down a bit explain how and why.

that was a nice begining! I'm also an AquaXBee fan! i think you shouldn't "say" the story that fast! i'm waiting for the next chapter the sooner possible.

love this pairing. keep it up.

Fantastic start. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I think my favorite part was when they were at lunch an the girls were all over Speedy.

You left me hanging! Wonderful beginning though. Wonder who will become Brother Blood's new obsession? When do Aqualad and Bumble Bee get together. Too cool! I can't wait to read the next chapter.

gracefulraven,

out!