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| Shika.Tot 2006-08-09 ch 19, | abuseThat was an awsome story that i really loved reading. |
| TangledPencils 2006-07-16 ch 19, | abuseI just found this story, and totally enjoyed it. Well done. |
| thebondgirl 2006-03-28 ch 19, | abusewow - that was really a lot better than i had expected it to be! (you know, pretty much every csi fan thinks 'uh huh - another grave danger fic?') but no worries, cause i loved this one ; very impressive writing style and a perfect ending, not rushing into '...and they all lived happily ever after', but more importantly promising change, the chance to improve, to heal. very nicely done!:):):) |
| weimfriend 2006-03-28 ch 19, | abuseWow This was great, loved every minute of it |
| nebbyJen 2005-12-07 ch 19, | abuseCame across your story today and read it straight through. What an excellent story. You kept the characters true to canon, the idea of Nick dealing, or rather not dealing, with the traumatic events realistic, and the team wanting to help and but failing believable. Wow. If you write a sequel, I'd love to read it. Thanks. Jen |
| iboneki 2005-11-29 ch 19, | abuseAh. I can't say enough about this series. I'm so glad you turned those two vigs into an epic! Let's see, I think I'm finally done eating leftovers, but if you'll allow me just one more holiday sentiment: I'm also thankful for your "open ending" -- the possibility of more is always a nice feeling. Great job. |
| Sue 2005-11-28 ch 19, anon. | abuseYou always do such a great job with your stories and this was the perfect ending. You're right, we don't know where the season is going to take us so you may be writing a part deux for this story. regardless, looking forward to your next story...something maybe to get me through the stress of finals? ;) (Though college DOES rule, its almost done for me, I graduate in a few weeks...yaho!) |
| thatTaylorgirl 2005-11-28 ch 19, | abusea completely amazing story!! Completely...open ending an all! The whole topic was totally engaging and ...WOW!! loved every minute of reading this! |
| Kristen999 2005-11-28 ch 19, | abuseWow. A very gripping and emotional story. Nick is still osrt of lost, but he has a guidebook, and just needs to know when to use it. Very real in this day and age. Emotional trauma does not heal very quickly and men take a lot longer to accept things and try to get help. I'm glad you took those two one shots and took a step back and planned this well thought out event. It had nice pacing and was never cheesy or over dramatic. Out guys bloundering around the best they can..I'm glad Warrick and Nick had thier talk and the all knowing Grissom knows the truth, but at least Nick knows that...he has a goal. I'll keep a look out for more of your work. Kristen |
| Faith Hope and Love 2005-11-28 ch 19, anon. | abuseThis was am story that I looked forward to every chapter that was posted. I loved it and enjoyed how well it was written. I look forward to your next story. |
| Mma63 2005-11-28 ch 19, | abuseChrissie, first of all, brilliant last chapter for this amazing journey you shared with us. I couldn't imagined a better finish than an open ending...deep inside there's a feeling and hope that everything will gonna be okay again (maybe it will take time and some more difficulties to fight and win). But they will make it! You're an amazing writer and perfect faithful to the characters. I'll miss you. Come back soon. Thanks. |
| duffshel 2005-11-28 ch 19, | abuseAh those boys! Great work on this chapter! I loved it. Nothing more than them acting like complete jack asses. This was very well done and you deserve a cookie. Too bad I can't bake though... And thanks a lot for the great review on my last chapter. Made me laugh with the letter part. Can't wait to see what you try out next. Good luck with it and see you later! |
| mayfairmom 2005-11-28 ch 19, | abuseSo sad to see this come to an end...it is/was an awesome ride. i love open endings because that means there's always the possibility of returning for more. And i also love that Nick isn't "fixed"...who of us are? It jus adds to the depth of the person...be well & God bless...an keep writing. Looking forward to more from you...Peace |
| everybetty 2005-11-28 ch 19, | abuse"So, Grissom knew that he wasn’t doing as well as he maybe should be. But, Grissom would know when he was. And when that happened, everyone would see it in him, and they would trust it, and everything would be okay again." Nice line. Always sad to see a fic end. Thanks for sharing. |
| higherbeingfriendsfan 2005-11-28 ch 19, | abuseAmazing ending, I like how its not finished, but that for now its alright with the group and Nick, the last line was great, it reminded me of an episode of CSI - The Hunger Artist, as the model's sister says something to that effect. Anyway I'm looking forward to what you plan to write next. |