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SarahSoph
2006-07-21 . chapter 1
Some great writing there.
Rainbow Stevie
2006-04-21 . chapter 1
You have such a gift for language. "Stars like broken glass"...I don't know why, but that line jumps out at me more than any other. I also like Cameron's analysis of her life, and especially how you capture the dynamic between her and House, how he won't relent on her, "men are beasts...and so am I." Because I will always forget to check the rating until it's too late, there were a line or two that my near-puritanical mind could have done without, but they are overshadowed by the art form that is the whole.
Angelfirenze
2006-03-22 . chapter 1
This was really quite well done. I thought, for a moment, that it was House/Cuddy, but I suppose that I shouldn't have. It doesn't matter. Anyway, good job.
Alipeeps
2006-01-09 . chapter 1
Wow. Your writing is so descriptive.. somehow without actually being explicitly so. It's eloquent and flowing and just beautiful. I love that you can use words to express feelings and sentiments without actually explaining in detail what is happening. It's in all the spaces inbetween the words. Metaphor and analogy. Beautiful.
Rain
2005-11-02 . chapter 1
I love the style of this piece. Well done.
tranquil-eyes
2005-11-01 . chapter 1
Lovely characterisation and superbly written. As always. =)

Love this: "He has known love, and better, more intensely than most because he has been betrayed by it and cannot let go." So very true. I look forward to more of your work. As always.
jadeddiva
2005-11-01 . chapter 1
That was lovely.
extrabitter
2005-11-01 . chapter 1
Very nicely written. I have no use at all for the show's version of Cameron, and even less respect for most fan versions of Cameron, but I have to give you credit for capturing the show's version without trying to make her sympathetic. That's a major achievement.
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