i totally love this! its so awesmoe! you did an awesome job!! you should be very proud!!

that was totally freaky adn then completly hilarious! awesome job!

lol, that was so unexpected!!

great job once again!

haha...u totally got me! i was kindda freaked there in the middle esp since i'm a bit of a cowardly custard! lol great job!

Oh gosh, that was so not expected! Great job!

Loved it Tejal! Fabulous ending!

Good job! I was was really freaked out. LOL

Aw, how cute! I loved it! I was totally freaked though when Brooke went missing and that kid Lisa. It was kinda scary. Lmao.

i really really like this, and i didnt expect the ending. that's for sure.
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OMG that was awesome!
I totally believed something had happened!
I LOVED IT!

HAH! Surprising ending! I kinda thought Brooke was kidnapped or soemething. LOL. You got me fooled there. Anyway, overall, I liked it! And I have a small teeny request. Think you can R&R my story, 'Voices of Fallen Leaves'? Please and Thank you.

that was good

haha that was cute...

That was a great story. I like the fact that you created a Halloween story. Plus, you had me going with Brooke and the kid missing. I thought something bad had happened to them. I love how Brooke got everyone including Nathan in on the birthday suprise for Lucas. I was even suprised. I hope that Nathan and Brooke will somehow get together in this story. I think that would be great. But anyways, I really can't wait to to read the next chapter. I have added you to my Favorite Stories list and Favorite Authors list. Keep up the great writing, and please update soon.

TEJ!

I love this! I love you! It's absolutely perfect, and well worth the wait. Thank you so much for writing it for me =)