Beautifully done! :D

-MELTS- OH! So.. sweet.. aw..

I loved it! The way you made Alexander so fidgety over the color of the jewels, he was almost like a little kid trying to decide what kind of cany he wanted!

I'm sorry this is such a late review but I loved it, keep up the good work!

*sigh* Amazing. Carry on dear author carry on...

Romantic and sweet.

Another beautiful chapter! I like the way you write all the characters. I don't feel mad at Alexander or hate Bagoas for Hephaistion's sake. Really beautiful.

-Elith

Brilliant ! We make you write more eh ? ... Well then.. get to it !! Please ??! This is another excellent installment (please note the stress on the word installment... as in... WRITE MORE!) I'm hoping that I will see another update very VERY soon ! ;-)

... my god, you amaze me with such writing. *sniff* That was so beautiful... and if you do not mind, I think that I shall sketch a picture based off of this. This was just amazing and brilliant. I love it. Please being me more stuff like this. What a sweet memory to pass between them. *hugs*

I especially loved how you portrayed the fact that none of the gems matched his eyes... although they were close. It's just that Phai's eyes are special... glimmering... and full of life. Whereas the sapphires are just eye candy. Phai's eyes are deep with meaning. Oh how I loved it. Please bring me some more. Please!

MANY COMPLIMENTS,
Lexy

Loike this a lot. They must have missed one another when parted by duty.It's very sweet and you handle Heph's shyness so well. Thanks.

Oopa! Well done! Very cute, and I think you got the characters down really well. I also like that you subtly put in how Hephaistion's loneliness is already developing.

-Elith

Romantic and sweet.

*turns into a lovely warm gooey puddle* ! I love it ! Respond to more challenges if it leads to fanfic like this ;-) !

*HUGS TIGHTLY* Thank you so much, love! (You saying that all the time makes me say it too, teehee.) I LOVE IT! 'Tis so sweet and so cute! And... you made this because I asked you to! *hugs more* I feel so special! I especially love the part where Phai says, "... if I get treatment like this afterwards." That was just so cute! I love how they warmed each other up, too. Teehee. *hands them some hot chocolate*

MANY COMPLIMENTS,
Lexy

Very sensitive words, loved it!

Sweet and romantic.