This is my favorite story so would you pretty please continue this.

This fic is really starting to heat up. I'm really sad that it was abandoned. Thank you for writing it as long as you did, though. Good luck with your other fics (I'll still dream of you finishing this one in the mean time).

I find your writing to be very intense, in a very good way. I have just spent the day reading all three parts of this series. I'm glad I didn't have to suffer through the suspense of reading them one chapter at a time while you were posting them. I am quite distressed to find that I've reached the end of what you have written. I don't suppose there's any chance you might come back and finish this at this late date, is there?

Honestly, you've done an awesome job. I'd love to see the rest.

I really do like the way Harry has matured into Tobias. I found the whole thing very believable.

So good! I especially like Tobias and Draco interaction, but I am hoping that they come to a sort of understanding (I'm a Draco fan). In this fic, they can't probably be friends but I hope that Tobias would realize that Draco isn't his father.

Anyways, great job on everything basically. Oh, another thing: I think it would be OOC for Hermione not to report the separate party since she is such a goody-goody.

Update when real life stops being so damn time-consuming!

I do hope that you have not given up on this fanfiction, as, in my opinion, it is quite unique and it would be quite a shame if you were to just stop at the point you did, or at any point for that matter. I have only just started to read the Tobias Snape series(as I have begun to call them), and quite avidly I might add. I have been following since Part the First(obviously) and am pleading with you now to continue, because I believe they are truly well written. It would be a crime if you were to not continue, and you would only be subjecting yourself to more of my whining. Do not doubt that if you do not update I will not harass you(all with good intentions, I assure you). So, I will bring my ramblings to a close and cease my pleading, for I do wish for my dignity to remain in one piece.

please update, the saga is SO GOOD, read the whole thing in one night. or if not, please allow someone to finish it!

i love it,i dony how u dont get cofused writing it i know i would!
cant wait to read more!!
updaate soon!

Absorbing, Brilliant, Scintillating even. Only one tiny problem; you never update! Please do, I'm suffering from some quite severe withdrawal symptoms and a chapter, even a very short chapter, would make me, and probably a lot of other people, very very happy.

I do hope you will continue this. It's a very unique plotline from what I've seen, and extremely well written

I have read the entire series so far, and I love how well you have thought out the characters' personalities. I genuinely hope you remove the hiatus so I can continue reading! I'm apprehensive and on edge about this party, so I'm hoping the next installment will come up soon. Keep up the awesome work please.
-kat

I just started reading this series and am very intrigued by the entire plot and the characters. I see that it has not benn updated in a while and do hope that you plan on doing some kind of continuation for it. I found that it is very well written and not lacking for interesting material. Good luck in your future writing.

I've just read the whole series to date and am totally captured by it. I think that it is one of the best Severus/Harry - father/son fics that I have encountered.

I particularily like the bad light that is thrown on James Potter - most make him either a selfless good-guy or an innocent dupe of either Severus or Lily's bad behavior. I rather like him being portraid in much the same same selfish berk as in Severus' pensive memory during fifth year.

Another point I really like is Harry slowly discovering that becoming Toby is actually freeing his true self and, while a confusing and disturbing transformation, finding that he is enjoying that freedom more and more. I find his three new partners / associates / supporters a much better fit than Ron and Hermione. Let's face it, for the most part Ron is thoughtless with the empathy of a rock and Hermione so convinced that she knows better than other people do what is best for them that I could gag.

She isn't very intelligent sometimes either. Take that SPEW **. It doesn't take have a brain to understand that either the majority of the house elves are truly happy, that such service is an inborn mandate, or that the whole race is under some sort of conpulsion vow/curse/?. Instead of some stupid campaign aimed at wizards who couldn't care less and benefit too much from this, she should have been reasearching the cause and if it were not inborn, looking for a way to break said vow/curse/?.

I have nothing but admiration for your developement of Severus and Toby's relationship. The tortured, twisted way that comes about is absolutely 'Snape' on both their parts. Nothing soft, sloppy or soppy about it but hard, sharp edges clashing until they are slowly battered into fitting together.

I have put you on my alert list with the hope that you will not let such a well done story languish unfinished but will return to complete it.

Cool stories! They are really adicting! I must admit my schoolwork suffered, cause I couldn't really stop reading. hehe. So...when are you gonna post the enxt chapter? I hope soon, cause I can hardly wait to read what's going to happen next.

the one-sided conversation w/ severus was hilarious. good work. please update!

I`ve read Part the First, Second, & Third non-stop for the past 2 days & i think it`s really brilliant. You portrayed the characters so stunningly. I`m jittery for the next chapter; hope it`s not on Hiatus for much too long now. Good day(: