 Kuro Ookami Hatake 2007-10-07 . chapter 1I love this! Poor Atemu, having to be a vampire!
Why would Yugi have to leave Atemu? They were both Vampires, they could both be together now! |
 Sweetchocolatecookies1312 2007-08-25 . chapter 1This is good! I like it! Sorry eating sugary stuff while reading this. Poor Atem as a vampire. This is cool! |
 TakabiTenshi 2007-08-13 . chapter 1oh,that was sad!but yet good at the same time.^^
see ya!
TT |
 ZombieBlinky 2007-07-07 . chapter 1Oh my dear. What happened to the OTHER vampiere then?! Aw crap, and to think they were just regular people going to a party that night. |
 Angel's Nocturne 2006-01-12 . chapter 1You know, I just sent my review to you for your other story just a few seconds ago!
Again, my heart aches and wishes that you had written more, but that is for you to decide, I guess.
It felt a bit rushed, though. Probably would've been better if it had more detail and was spread out over two or even three chapters. But that's only my opinion. Otherwise, I absolutely loved it! |
 sephira-san 2006-01-04 . chapter 1Loved the story...It was awesome...I am totally adding you to my fave authors list...And there are a few more of your fics I plan on reading... |
 Slifer the Sky Dragon 2005-11-03 . chapter 1XP Yeah, i typed this in like 30 minutes...
Sorry about that... |
 Kuramasgal 2005-11-02 . chapter 1k...great story so far, when r u updating?!?!?!?! can't wait! |
 lucidscreamer 2005-11-02 . chapter 1This reads as rather slap-dash and would benefit from a good editing. You've left out words in some sentences, making them difficult to read (or simply incoherent). You have Yugi dressing as a "vampire outfit" instead of as a vampire. The plot, such as it is, is very rushed and lacking in suspence. Not your best effort, I'm sad to say. |
 Aerith Queen of Cetra 2005-11-01 . chapter 1OMG! Cool fic man! Me likey vampire fics! ^_^
It was quite sad but I couldn't help but laugh at Bakura deciding to make a "budget-wise costume"
I would love to see a second chapter if you do decide to make one ^_^ |