Reviews for Forgotten Revised

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SithKnight-Galen 2008-03-14 ch 1,	abuseWhat an intriguing opening for what could have happened in the aftermath of Third Impact. I would love to see how things were going to progress with this story concept and where all of the surviving characters did eventually end up. I do hope that you might consider coming back to this story at some point in the future.
caleb 2007-10-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseinteresting rewrite of your inspired story line, please keep writing this when you have time
rcswart 2007-08-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is great! Please update soon!
Hidari 2006-07-22 ch 1,	abuseSmashing first chapter! It's got me hooked. Update when you can, will be waiting. ^_^
Necrokon 2006-07-08 ch 1,	abuseI can't wait for the next chapter. Can you hurry up with the explanation, because I really want to know what happens next.
xl midnight lx 2006-07-04 ch 1,	abuseI LOVE THIS STORY! You should really put most of your fanfic writing time into this fic. I realize that you have alot of fanfics you are working on and from what I understand a pretty demanding job, but this is a great fic so keep up the good work.
Facelemon 2006-04-12 ch 1,	abuseAnother great story, another century waiting for an update (sigh) Well atleast its worth actually waiting for. Well anyway congratulations on another ripper of a fanfic. Me and my mate both agree, you write the best Asuka/Shinji fics. So keep at it and may an update come swiftly.
Forever Rahhel 2006-03-24 ch 1,	abuseHow come U have revised? The actuall story was already great. Well, it's your story so keep it up.
Somewhere NofA 2006-02-10 ch 1,	abuseHidy Hi Well, I realised I had forgotten to review this one after I saw it come up, so I’ll go for it. It seems the biggest changes you made where to compress a good part of it into one chapter and eliminate the originals predilection towards having many a sex scene. I always loved the fics that take place many years down the road as well as fics that take place in the original timeline, and with the writing in first person from Asuka it’s almost like a mix of the two. Keep it up. Have a good one eh.
Nono-kun 2006-02-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseI prefer the original version of this story to this one, and should like you to re post your original first two chapters that I may once again read them and compair them to this new version. If my recolection is correct though Asuka was kept out of the loop the better part of a day as to her relationship to Shinji, and had no help from her subconsious. I thought that the first attempt did a better job of building dramatic tention, by allowing us to watch Asuka struggle through the discovery of that information which we are already privi to. Continue to improve as a writer, and I should look forward to your next update.
ERROR809 2006-01-06 ch 1,	abuseOMG, excellent story. This is a very worthwhile story, and it sure is one of my favorites. Very creative, and it is surely one of the possible scenarios after the movie "end of evangelion". Update soone please! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Incognito girl 2005-11-21 ch 1,	abusehahaha, 3rd time's the charm, right?
forgottendiary 2005-11-12 ch 1,	abuseHey there! Sorry! I didn't even realize you already posted this. thunderous applaud Haha! Well, you'll most likely know what I'll say anyways. ^.~ What? No? Asuka: Gott in Himmel! (^_^) Shinji: Umm, Asuka... Asuka: Shut up you lame excuse for a combat pilot! I can't believe Hououza doesn't have any idea what ForgottenDiary has to say about the fic! Shinji: sweatdrops Asuka: IT'S AN UBER, UBER, UBER NICE START, D'OH! (You just had to make me naked in so many scenes, huh? No matter, the great Sohryu Asuka Langley's body deserves to be flaunted in the most beautiful ways!) Shinji: blushes Hahaha! Ok, I'll stop here. All the best!
BelleDayNight 2005-11-12 ch 1,	abuseForgottenDiary recommended you to me. I don't actually know ANYTHING about Evangelion, but this certainly sounds quite good. It was very well written with very few errors. It's obvious that you are an older writer because of the depth you went to in only the first chapter! I'm not familiar with the anime, but you have made me endeared to these characters with this solitaire chapter. Best of luck on this. And I hope to see you writing some Inuyasha (I read your profile). That's an anime I actually know quite well. =)
Rising Dragon 2005-11-06 ch 1,	abuseSweet... I like this Forgotten better than the last one. Keep it up!

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