Wow, I love it! :D

It sounds really metaphorical and poetic. Lovely writing! I'd better keep an eye on you ;)

Wow, talk about deep. ;) Very nicely done; your metaphor was perfect and the angst amount was awesome. Great job!

I like stories that go into Robin's thoughts and pov. It's always interesting to find out what might be going through the Boy Wonder's head.

Yeah, me again...

Telling off that loser Natalia Howard person whose review will be below mine on the site...

Hello? Don't criticise THIS (THE thing that pretty much started the Narroch06/RobinRocks/Small Print partnership) when you can't even capitalize and punctuate your review properly! And don't greet someone with "Hey! Waz up!" when you're just going to make some lame-ass crack at them. If it bored you why did you read it all the way through? Why did you even review? You think Narroch06 actually CARES what you think? PLUS it wasn't even constructive criticism. If you think something is bad then tell the writer how you think it could be better.

Stupid little reviews like the one you gave aren't helpful or cutting; they're just a stupid waste of website space. And not only that, but you then slagged off someone ELSE'S story in the review too. That is SO amazingly unprofessional.

And, like most flamers, you didn't sign in.

Surprise surprise.

Narroch06: *Heh*... sorry about this. I just saw that review and had to grill that idiot... She may not ever read it, but everyone else can... Mwa ha, public humiliation...

And hey, where did that Spell Check button go?

O.o

Your partner-in-crime/defence lawyer,

RobinRocks x

hey waz up i thought your story was not all that great.dude whats the point of the story. its so boring you put me to sleep THREE TIMES! but hey this is only the second worst story i've read. HAVE YA READ "MY SWEET PRINCE"! if not DON'T I REPEAT DON'T!

WOW! You deeply impress me with your metaphorical (Did i spell that right?) language.

I'm going to check if you've carried this on, be back soon!

I love these quick one shots. Short, angsty, to the point. Good descriptions, a nice new view on it. I always love that phrase 'little bird' in refrence to Robin. Good job. Robin? Pathetic? That's what you said in your author's note. HE'S NOT PATHETIC! :(

Good fic tho!

ohwow, it is so good, wow, really great, i just... i really like it and i like robin and it was great how you wrote him. It was sad too, but very nice.poro robin, he loves slade so muchreally... I like metaphors too and you used soem really good ones. It is kind of despressing thouh too.glad you won the air guitar constest and yur right; teen tiytans is not an anime! teen titans rules! keep It up! you rule and are a realy good writter!

KittyBangbang

Great one-shot i agree with robinrocks don't listen to any one who tells that its bad or a waste of time because they are loosers! its a great one shot better than anything i could have written :) go you!

As RobinRocks said, the metaphors you use are brilliant. The atmosphere of it all really seems to capture that..darkness that just has to be present whenever Robin and Slade are involved. Squee! XD

The last line had a great impact. Beautiful! -

Hey like the one-shot. If you were talking about Slade being the Abyss, you did it pretty well. RobinRocks wants you to give her an idea or any ideas for "Small Print" so that she can continue. I also gave her ideas for this story cuz it's by far the best one I've read so far. So review to her or E-mail her for any idaes that you want to share for "Small Print". I also think that she should have a shower scene in "Small Print". She's waiting for your ideas and see might put our ideas together and in other writers ideas for "Small Print".

Sorry for writing so much, but for her to continue "Small Print", you need to give her your ideas. I'll have my own story up soon.(i hope)

To learn more about me visit my bio which is now up.

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Rocky Wolf

Ooh... Ok, that was pretty good! Don't pay any attention to that other loser who said that it was pointless. No, I liked it. See, I came here after you shamelessly plugged it in your review for Asylum ch. 11 (so glad you liked it, BTW! - Yami no Kaiba is upset because it wasn't "graphic" enough...) and read it and was like, oh, wow...

I really liked your use of metaphors, like all that gold coin stuff and Slade (I think?) being the actual "abyss" Robin has fallen into. Or rather, Robin's actual obssession with Slade being something that he has now fallen so deeply into he can't get back out of it.

But then you have to ask yourself "Does he want to?"

Because, you know, I think that Robin's being obssessed with Slade gives his little life meaning... You know "Birthmark", when Slade says to Robin that he didn't come back for "him"? I'm sure Robin was really cut up at that - you know, "My life is not worth living!" kind of thing... tee hee -

Anyhoo, I thought it was good. I think you should continue (been there, done that. I was writing a one-shot called "Small Print" - Robin/Slade, if you are interested - and I got a request to continue with it so now there are two chapters and I'm planning on a third).

Yes, continue! I shall read and review!

New chapter of "Asylum" up soon, I promise...

You're right; pointless...