okay...the last one was...O_O now i fear going out after 5pm

This story is okay, EXEPT that u made my favorite character die! Still, it was good. Please make more chapters because I want to find out what was licking Falco's hand.

That was actually pretty scary, knowing it's real life and everything, but I couldn't help but think the psychopath was Wolf! I know he's not, but his nails in Brawl could compete with him!

I love the suspense here, it was a good job. I had no idea how hooked I was to it until it's finished. It's depressing. It would be good if you made this into a whole load of SSB ghost stories which aren't necessarily true.

I love Falco in this and his thinking, especially the teenagers bit! He's such a hypocrite.

I've just realised how long ago you posted this story. Oh well, some fics need to be brought out into the limelight even when they are finished.

I really like how you link these stories to SSB, and Luigi seeming spaced out into looking after the shop (I thought he was a full-time plumber?)

You're change should be your change, it's a good idea to change those. They annoyed me, but other than that, this chapter was a good job.

Onto the next one!

I'm pretty impressed. I've been interested in these kind of sci-fi things, even if I know they're not going to be true. You put a lot of detail in the beginning, then the dialogue kind of killed it. Keeping the balance would help you.

Other than that, it was a good chapter.

Nice horror. What else are you fgoing to write for horror?

Ohh... I loved how you switched to the murderer's point of view. Very creepy...

I'm definately not sleeping tonight...

Oh, boy...

I'm locking my windows, locking -no- barricading my door, and shoving tons of pillows and blankets under my bed. The light will be on, and I won't sleep.

And it's your fault ;)

Its good, but not incredibly scary. The last one was definitely the best, with the message and all. I'd heard the third one somewhere, I can't remember where, though...Anyways, I think that you should try to keep the danger, whatever it might be, hidden until the very end. A lot of the time, people are afraid of what they don't know, so they will be more scared of a nameless horror than one they know about. Just a suggestion, though--not trying to be annoying. I'll make sure to stay tuned.

Wha! Nana's dead! -Sobs- -Blows nose- But that was MUCH scarier than the last two. And what WAS the creature who licked Falco? We may never know...Anyway! I hope your next years one is just as good! I had this one horror story in my head...but I forgot...As soon as I remember it, I'll be sure to mention it! Anyway! Great job!

dude, sweet chapters! Not entirely scary, but makes ya think a little, nice! Keep it up!

Great but a... who was licking Falco's hand?

Yeah...okay this one was ver freaky! Nothing else to be said. But it was also very tragic in a way you know. Sorry for reviewing in NOVEMBER! AAGH!

Good Job!

Royal Kenya

It's ironic how I begged you to write this over and over again and I didn't read it. Then again, I'm never sure on the definition of irony

...What is it anyway...

*awkward silence*

Yeah...anyway Oh My Freakin Gosh! That was so eerie and creepy. So was the retarded guy licking his hand.

I think I speak for everyone when I say:

EW!

Yeah but that was totally cool Cryssy! That's my offical nickname for you. You were the only one without a nickname from the FF sistas! But once again very very creepy!

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